Fallen Soldier.

[MC Anonymous]

I'm here to address those who will press the necks of respect
burst the tech and expect to get dealt with next
I work and sweat for certain respects of my growth
below and above does show the deadly downhill slope
this skill is dope, but these lyrics wont' feed my mouth
down my arms and sleeves the blood is bleeding south
and that's what greed's about, to selfish to think of others
and sadly I can't quench my thirst with the drink of lovers
I sink and plummet like vital signs, in my eyes my idol shines
but breaks behind the pressure of my furious spiteful rhymes
insight climbs, as it recites lines with a decipher in mind
to not blind the listener, but give sound clarity like chimes
the pain's gripping at my ankles like shackles, it's burning like candles
but I'll dismantle this ball N chain so I can lead by example.

I'm escaping, the chain's scraping, and my brain's chasing
this pain is not elusive but exclusive to the same pacing
the plain casings of empty shells call upon my soul's empty wells
to maybe swell and explode with emotion to combat hell
the gats show my ultimate tomb, cursed since the womb
rinse the moon for the white needs red to symbolize doom
I must realize soon, I will never accomplish nothing by running
I stop stunting, drop nothing, and begin to start gunning
I hear drumming, the war drum pounds as I hear the sound
my eyes glow around the cornea with fiery pounds
I let out a war cry for I will be done, independent with glee
for me I'll rather die a warrior then live without being free.

In the sands of time I arise to fight the desert storm
burnt swords, dirt boards, surrounding Father Time's dorm
suspended in animation, pretended through damnation
but rediscovered with the examination of one nation
a nation surrounded with suspended doors, portals, and gates
able to escape from one point to the next, able to evade fate
until the slate is to dirty to wipe, and your deeds are met
you bleed I bet, then that means your as guilty as the rest
if you have a heart in your chest, you are as evil as I
feeble to eyes, even though I get on my knees and try
I needed to cry once more to rediscover my inner being
but it's gone now.....only a demon I'm seeing..

[Ka0t1c]

yeah, that was pretty good, way above an 8, lower than 9

[MC Anonymous]

yeah, that was pretty good, way above an 8, lower than 9

Thanks dude.

[The GameKeeper]

That was nice man,

this skill is dope, but these lyrics wont' feed my mouth
down my arms and sleeves the blood is bleeding south

I'm escaping, the chain's scraping, and my brain's chasing
this pain is not elusive but exclusive to the same pacing

Sick... You always write nice shit... Is this completed or a rough draft?

1st verse has 14 lines and the next 2 have 12... you could leave it the way it is because its definitely tight, or u could add a few and drop 16 on each to make it right...

Very nice man... youve got talent.

[MC Anonymous]

That was nice man,

this skill is dope, but these lyrics wont' feed my mouth
down my arms and sleeves the blood is bleeding south

I'm escaping, the chain's scraping, and my brain's chasing
this pain is not elusive but exclusive to the same pacing

Sick... You always write nice shit... Is this completed or a rough draft?

1st verse has 14 lines and the next 2 have 12... you could leave it the way it is because its definitely tight, or u could add a few and drop 16 on each to make it right...

Very nice man... youve got talent.

Completed, I did like that cause' I felt like it would display the story better. and yeah thanks for the compliments

[Emadyville]

Another fucking enjoyable read

[MC Anonymous]

Another fucking enjoyable read

I aim to please

[James R.]

Ill

Period

[MC Anonymous]

Ill

Period

Thanks dude.

[MC Anonymous]

bump

[mcZu]

Ill

Period

[MC Anonymous]

Ill

Period

Thanks