Unexpected

[Ka0t1c]

My existence is unexpected and my intentions are unaccepted
what am I missin, a direction on my mission but I'm destined
for an enterance from progression if I get interests instead of questions
by my friendships which i've left em cuz I've come distant and im despirate
I can sense it's detection which is my position in possession thru my convictions n confessions
and my preventions of perception, also my decisions to dissection like division, thats the
infliction of infection
i've got suspicions I've suspected thru collisions which collected
I thought charisma was protected but i did not compehend, so dyslected
livin pretend; then poetic, "just give us an endin to our guessin"
well men, im pathetic, I insist you assess it, are you pissed my profession:
I'm a prick I've perfected? Psycho dick, want discretion?
be my critic correctin my condition, convection:
convincin contestants im addicted to addin
an edge to what's listed, im laughin cuz you're mixed out this message
just listen, suggestions to my lyrics this session?

[Arabian Shady]

i am indeed mixed man,lol
your opening was super dope, probably one of ur best, structure was beautifull and then it all went down (unfortunately)...not lyrically tho, cause the lyrics were dope,the structure, by which i mean those short bars, fucks up the flow cause its changes drastically.the flow in the beginin if kept constant would with out a doubt make this piece one of your best so far.
I understand your style, but change is of the essense, this example of your first 3 bars proved potent lyrical abilities man, silly structural issues fucks it up=BAD.
short bars are never fun to read, cause that way the reader never knows how fast or slow he/she is supposed to go.
i dont mean to criticise but its a shame to see ur efforts go to waste over a minute issue
Peace bro

[Ka0t1c]

well ok, i hope this helps, lol

[MC Anonymous]

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Idk this was very......lyrically brilliant, but if you recorded this it wouldn't sound good at all.
it'd be like you were spittin' gibberish if you tried this verbally.
Still dope lyrics.

[Ka0t1c]

if i record it, i will do it slow and i will make it work, i promise you cuz i want everyone to understand this verse word for word, thanx for ur opinion tho

[James R.]

Lyrics are tight. I'm just interested to hear it because it seems like it'd be a hard delivery to master. I got faith in you though man. Rip it up.

[Rain Matrix]

dude I'm glad I can read your shit, your rhymes are not the norm they have meaning
some people put everything they have into their lyrics and with you it shows

I'm not the most liked but I do my thing and no matter what life throws at me
I'll never spit lame as lines while sounding like somethig I'm not

if people can't accept that then they need to stop saying "keep it real"

sorry about all that but I really do think, rap and kaotic are badass

[Ka0t1c]

dude I'm glad I can read your shit, your rhymes are not the norm they have meaning
some people put everything they have into their lyrics and with you it shows

I'm not the most liked but I do my thing and no matter what life throws at me
I'll never spit lame as lines while sounding like something I'm not

if people can't accept that then they need to stop saying "keep it real"

sorry about all that but I really do think, rap and kaotic are badass

wow, thanx!!!!!!!! i'm glad u understand what i write and i do work hard because i see myself as a person ppl can look up to and learn from. thru my lyrics and from my personality.

thanx everybody who thinks this piece is brilliant

[Arabian Shady]

dude I'm glad I can read your shit, your rhymes are not the norm they have meaning
some people put everything they have into their lyrics and with you it shows

I'm not the most liked but I do my thing and no matter what life throws at me
I'll never spit lame as lines while sounding like something I'm not

if people can't accept that then they need to stop saying "keep it real"

sorry about all that but I really do think, rap and kaotic are badass

wow, thanx!!!!!!!! i'm glad u understand what i write and i do work hard because i see myself as a person ppl can look up to and learn from. thru my lyrics and from my personality.

thanx everybody who thinks this piece is brilliant

OFF THE CHAIN WITH OUT A DOUBT!!
dude your stuff is nearly allways sick, the problem lies (in my humble opinion) in the way you write it down, with each bar having only 4-5 words, its never fun to read it.
Neways this is truly a remarkable peice
Solid
Peace

[Ka0t1c]

thanks