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Anonymous Call

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 20th, '08, 17:18

Mysterious lyrics aimed to tickle the spirit you hear it
and fear it, spear it with lyrical power so you can clear shit
the sheer hit made you fear spit, unprecedented anonymous
rhythm synonymous to the gods of this, presented autonomous
resented through time, sublime in appearance, as the clear sense
presents in clearance, my ears tense, I begin to resent coherence
In a sentence resentment can present elements of contempt
except redemption illuminates cold feelings, then add supplements of cement
let's have an experiment, close your eyes for 2 seconds
and envision death without hell, heaven, or weapons
darkness detected, it engulfs your veins, heart, and soul
a start I stole so an end will come as not a part, but whole
painted with art and coal, the dark portrait of death you see
a refugee within the frame, and in this world, a breath aint free.
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Dec 20th, '08, 17:38, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 20th, '08, 17:33

excellent I would have put an "a" before breath ain't free but my advice is worthless
because my ego is so huge that I can barely type this without shaking and tweaking

once again great job :y:
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 20th, '08, 17:37

painted with art and coal, the dark portrait of death you see


thats my fave line :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 20th, '08, 17:38

Rain Matrix wrote:excellent I would have put an "a" before breath ain't free but my advice is worthless
because my ego is so huge that I can barely type this without shaking and tweaking

once again great job :y:

Lol thanks for the advice, actually I'm gonna edit it cause' that does make more sense.
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 20th, '08, 17:38

Kaotic wrote:
painted with art and coal, the dark portrait of death you see


thats my fave line :y:

Thanks dude. :y:
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby mcZu » Dec 20th, '08, 18:57

Great drop, liked it, enjoyed it
Keep em coming bro :y:
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 21st, '08, 00:47

mcZu wrote:Great drop, liked it, enjoyed it
Keep em coming bro :y:

Thanks dude. :y:
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby James R. » Dec 21st, '08, 03:46

I liked it. Read it straight through. Flowed well. The vocab, while intellectual, wasn't overwhelming. Good job
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Re: Anonymous Call

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 21st, '08, 03:48

James R. wrote:I liked it. Read it straight through. Flowed well. The vocab, while intellectual, wasn't overwhelming. Good job

Thanks dude :y:
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