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Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

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Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 22nd, '08, 03:23

Bored as hell. Had no subject matter, and just jotted down more stupid shit that came to my head. When I find a good subject matter, i'll write something really worth reading. Rate if you want! Just a bunch of rhymes....you know from my previous 2 writings that I just write random shit!


When I see you, i'mma eat you/
Mess with your wife, cheat you, and beat you/
Waste your life, leak you, and feed you
to my Dog just to murder and evil-deed you/
Cappin bullets in your ass, to bust and make you see-thru...
Like your girls lingerie when she gettin ready to freak you/
This is exactly where smokin tree's will come to lead you/
Smoke out, and this'll come and lead you to the sequel/
Straight snatchin you cowards up, like a seagull or an eagle/
Speakin straight Ignorant Shit like Jay-Z and Beanie Seagle/
Just cause you can spit better, don't mean me and you is equal/
Pop a couple of pills, to feed you, no one see's you/
I'm goin insane, and I know that I am evil/
Call me for cocaine, shrooms, and even lethal/
Or come see what a cut to the spleen do/
We be bustin guts on the table, like a machine do/
Jason ass mask, with a machete to come and fiend you/
Its just too bad, I never came out to even seek you/
Than who the hell did I come and do this shit to!??!!?/
Last edited by Ice_Scarred on Dec 22nd, '08, 03:31, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 03:28

This is a decent piece, 7/10.
Keep droppin bro! :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 22nd, '08, 03:31

MC Anonymous wrote:This is a decent piece, 7/10.
Keep droppin bro! :y:


Oh thanks dude! Sorry it couldn't be better. When I get bored, I just like to write random shit. Thanks bro!
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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby Robbie G » Dec 22nd, '08, 03:50

It was decent for a random freestyle with no subject.
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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 22nd, '08, 04:04

Shady Babie wrote:It was decent for a random freestyle with no subject.


lol, thanks. XD
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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby lilrossy » Dec 22nd, '08, 08:50

yeah man good drop. nothin special but i really enjoyed readin it. :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 22nd, '08, 14:49

nice read .. it's decent pal .. nice lyrics there :y:
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Re: Scattertidus pt. 2 (Duhmass Monsta)

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 22nd, '08, 17:43

Thanks for reviewing it dudes.
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