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Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 21st, '08, 21:48

I'm droppin' the sickest cannablistic characteristics
to carelessly sic ticks and dissect with spherical thick clips
this sickness developed through viral databases
spiral data chases in my DNA to shape my children's faces
in the building spaces articulating my next course of attack
force the retraction of a gat and react with 10 clips to the back
I roll wit a ship full of plaques, sip on this if you spit to diss
punchlines hit and miss daily even when I shit and piss
what type of spit is this I whisper to this pussy without whiskers
make this Scott stiffer then Steiners steroid booster lifters
fuckin' rooster kisser, I'll chop off your lips with four chips
cause' only thing gayer then him is Chris Crocker worship
I committed abortion, sliced the placenta with an erect penis
you've come to witness, listen, learn and expect genius
detect the forum seamstress, kill the only bitch in threads
and as easy as I itch my head I can easily kill this snitch instead.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Flame War

Postby James R. » Dec 21st, '08, 21:52

Damn. Somebody pissed you off a little bit lol. Flow was on and off in some points, but I feel like you'd have to KNOW how to deliver it to make it flow, or it could just be me (always an option). Otherwise it was ill shit man. Keep it coming.
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Re: Flame War

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 21st, '08, 21:57

James R. wrote:Damn. Somebody pissed you off a little bit lol. Flow was on and off in some points, but I feel like you'd have to KNOW how to deliver it to make it flow, or it could just be me (always an option). Otherwise it was ill shit man. Keep it coming.

Thanks bro, and yeah I know how I'll deliver this one.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Flame War

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 21st, '08, 22:36

make this Scott stiffer then Steiners steroid booster lifters


that part is dope
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 21st, '08, 22:41

Kaotic wrote:
make this Scott stiffer then Steiners steroid booster lifters


that part is dope

Thanks :y:
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Re: Flame War

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 21st, '08, 23:45

woah!!! :y:
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Re: Flame War

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 00:12

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:woah!!! :y:

Lol thanks
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Flame War

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 02:55

bump more people need to see this.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Flame War

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 22nd, '08, 14:52

MC Anonymous wrote:bump more people need to see this.


pal no need to see it .. it's sick as always .. everything was fine .. i enjoyed reading it .. :y:
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Re: Flame War

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 14:53

z_em wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:bump more people need to see this.


pal no need to see it .. it's sick as always .. everything was fine .. i enjoyed reading it .. :y:

thanks.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Flame War

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 22nd, '08, 17:58

Str8 fire man. I truly enjoyed it. The rhymes were dynamic dude. 9/10 :y:
Tight stuff!
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Re: Flame War

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 17:59

Ice_Scarred wrote:Str8 fire man. I truly enjoyed it. The rhymes were dynamic dude. 9/10 :y:
Tight stuff!

Thanks dude!
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Flame War

Postby kalbird » Dec 22nd, '08, 20:03

Ill man!!
LOST FOR WORDSACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER
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Re: Flame War

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 20:04

kalbird wrote:Ill man!!

Thanks bro. :y:
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Re: Flame War

Postby Urban Punk » Dec 22nd, '08, 21:16

"I'm droppin' the sickest cannablistic characteristics
to carelessly sic ticks and dissect with spherical thick clips
this sickness developed through viral databases
spiral data chases in my DNA to shape my children's faces"

that was sick bro keep it up :y:
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