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No Hope

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 22nd, '08, 00:17

i've been walking down a long route, but now
somehow i wanna get my song out, but what about?

well, my thoughts are clouded, shall i pout
or rebound from my drought?

i found my outlet and also my sound
still my talent is awful if my skills feel held down

i'm real exhausted, resultin in strong doubt
that i'll amount up to a proud and powerful mouth

i have felt like runnin but there's always someone to help
so while i am under a spell from Heaven and Hell

I'm ready to deal with whatever but fail
everyday pressure accells, it's never ok

i guess that i will forever be stray
on this planet i dwell

yet, i count on a challenge as a i wander around
wonder if i'm counterfeit; the clown of the crowd
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: No Hope

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 22nd, '08, 14:54

that's good dude , i liked it .. nice job here
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z_em = Slim Zaddy = Zaid AQ which is my real name
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Re: No Hope

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 23rd, '08, 01:03

thanx man :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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