Z_em VS Shadymademe ( closed )

[Slim Zaddy]

so here we go ... 8 line ..

The point without FOREPLAY,
I’m sick and tired YOUR GAY,
You dont scare nobody you’ve FAZED NONE,
sitten here BLAZED SON, wit RAISED GUNZ,
I’m spitten fire and you’re the AMAZED ONE,
Your mad cuz im WAY SICK, my styles amazing yours is BASIC,
No hold on the trigger i SPRAY HICKS, so get on ya knees and PRAY QUICK,
Before i smoke you before the POTS SPREAD,
Don’t fuck with me dude i got a HOT HEAD,

peace dude ...

[Solace]

Alright heres mine:

I'll show you whose rhymes smoke hottest,
Trying to battle me, its like Canibus versus a choke artist,
I dont act hardest, but its quite hard not to,
I was born like that, I'll bite off your rhymes like Nosferatu,
You better watch your back, keep your eyes wide open,
You already finished your rap, and your still choking,
When you step to me, all I see is pretend,
The shit you say makes me laugh, like you was a comedian.

[Slim Zaddy]

okay .. good drop though dude .. so it's open to voters now

[Solace]

okay .. good drop though dude .. so it's open to voters now

Yeah, yours was nice too Open to voting

[MC Anonymous]

FLOW Shadymademe
STRUCTURE Shadymademe
PUNCHES Shadymademe
MULTIES Z_em
RHYMES Z_em
VOCAB Shadymademe
COMPLEXITY Shadymademe
NAMEPLAY N/A
OTHER N/A

Shadymademe got my vote.

[Solace]

Thanks man^ 1-0

[Slim Zaddy]

thanks for voting man ,, then 1 for shadymademe ..

[gladimnotsoluble]

Do i have to list out every individual thing?

Because Z_em, your flow needs a lot of work, and you're punchlines were pretty weak--structure wise again, you need work

I think shadymademe clearly took it because it flowed, it hit harder, it brang in references, and it overall was better

shadymademe wins

[MC Anonymous]

3 Hit KO, thread needa get locked.

[Slim Zaddy]

Congratulation shadymademe .. you got it this time .. I will practice more then I will re battle you dude ..

[Solace]

Yay i won

[Requiem]

damn shadymademe owned
flow wise, and rhyme wise shadymademe had it.
structure wise z_em, but again shadymademe owned punchlines

[Solace]

Thanks, i already won this 3 hit KO, but fine. Go ahead. Make it a 4 hit ko

[Rain Matrix]

FLOW - Z em killed it
STRUCTURE - z em had moe multi's and was consistant
PUNCHES - z em the other dudes comedian line is played out
MULTIES - Z em already mentioned
RHYMES -shadymademe for the nosferatu line
VOCAB - Tie
COMPLEXITY - Z em harder hitting
NAMEPLAY - None at all

OTHER - TRshady.com this was a Good Battle we need to see more like this
and more voters lending a quick breakdown to the competitors (it's supposed to be fun)

Z em wins, good battle man

[Solace]

Thanks, 4-1

damn, now he got votes. Well it was already 3 hit ko so...