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Dear Summer [unfinished]

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Dear Summer [unfinished]

Postby lilrossy » Dec 23rd, '08, 15:57

its was only written roughly but i thought i'd post to see what u think of it so far. so i appreciate all the feed i get.

[verse one]
dear summer I recall, blu-tacin 2pac to my wall,
cd stack of black rap got me actin like fuc all,
my hats back, pants at my asscrack, ready to blast,
childhood past, gangsta rap made me grow up to fast,
class i never passed, a loser, actin immature,
there's sumthin life was lackin, my future looked obscure,
2 middle fingers up as i walk thru deez streets,
bangin beats, got me runnin amuck, as aggression peaks,
depression peeps, u couldn't touch me, teachers couldn't teach me,
different moods for weeks, it wasn't easy,
couldn't reach me, phone ringin but i ain't chattin,
my heads swingin, gota go to skewl, feel like packin,
at times it felt like everything was pissin me off,
couldn't drive my car without beepin 'n' flippin em off,
sticky finger tips cuz i couldn't geta bitch,
sumthin needed to change quick, i was sick of dis shit.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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