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Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 22nd, '08, 19:08

I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech
grab the mic and spit with a force of these F1's horses
and outer space is the only time you left my forces
An MC so ill when I cum I eject hepatitis
so focused in my eye sockets lies the leopard iris
dare to try this, I'll outline your body in lead like animation
and I'm spittin' with a flow so sick like sewer contamination
chopped off ya head and took a picture, now your mind's in a right frame
the verbal firefighter, the way I'm always surrounded by bright flames
got a fiery aura like meteors coming into the Earth's orbit
my rhymes burst for it, to stop my fire you must first forfeit
I'll curb stomp your face to give ya brain a jump start
with punchlines so fluid, the seep through the pores and lump hearts.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile.

Postby Darkblade44431 » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:11

Great simile's and metaphors. I'm tired so idk if it was a good topic or had good flow..rofl, but really nice job.
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:30

Thanks both of you! :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile.

Postby Kez » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:31

It reminds me of Infinite, not sure why.

Sick stuff :y:
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:32

Thanks Kez :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:37

Scott Macdougall wrote:ok in all seriousness, this is good

Thanks :y:
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:03

Scott Macdougall wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech
grab the mic and spit with a force of these F1's horses
and outer space is the only time you left my forces
An MC so ill when I cum I eject hepatitis
so focused in my eye sockets lies the leopard iris
dare to try this, I'll outline your body in lead like animation
and I'm spittin' with a flow so sick like sewer contamination
chopped off ya head and took a picture, now your mind's in a right frame
the verbal firefighter, the way I'm always surrounded by bright flames
got a fiery aura like meteors coming into the Earth's orbit
my rhymes burst for it, to stop my fire you must first forfeit
I'll curb stomp your face to give ya brain a jump start
with punchlines so fluid, the seep through the pores and lump hearts.


part of infinite
This is the season for noise pollution contamination
Examination of more cartoons than animation
My lamination of narration
Hit's a snare and bass in a track fucked up rapper interrogation
When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing
I turn the stage into a barren wasteland...

looool, basically i'm saying ur just as sick as eminem, good job haha :y:

Holyshit LOL didn't even notice that! Good find! :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:19

Scott Macdougall wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech


that reminds me of the start of 313

I'll have you taken back to Christ when you sacrifice
The way you hacked and sliced when I fill your back with knives.
Jacking life's of MC's, now I'm set to launch a plan
For blowing up the stage with illegal contraband.

:sweating:

you're naturally writing like eminem did in the album infinite... i is the jealous one :p

:o LOL
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:41

Scott Macdougall wrote:no wait.. what am i doing....

this was wack....!!

:shifty: ;) :sweating: :whistle:

:-k :shocked2:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile.

Postby The GameKeeper » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:57

10/10 :worship:

That shit was sick... record that man... thats a keeper.
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:58

The GameKeeper wrote:10/10 :worship:

That shit was sick... record that man... thats a keeper.

Thanks dude :y:
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 19:29

Scott Macdougall wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
Scott Macdougall wrote:no wait.. what am i doing....

this was wack....!!

:shifty: ;) :sweating: :whistle:

:-k :shocked2:


peace offering... :flower:

Accepted. :flower: :y:
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 22:19

Idk, you think of one, nothing homosexual though :angry:
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Re: Versatile.

Postby SajN » Dec 23rd, '08, 23:27

Vocab is top as always.
Some great and some better-than-great rhymes :y:

Flow was there so it's cool.

Sick piece :y:
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 23:29

SajN wrote:Vocab is top as always.
Some great and some better-than-great rhymes :y:

Flow was there so it's cool.

Sick piece :y:

Thanks dude. :y:
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