Versatile.

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 22nd, '08, 19:08

I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech
grab the mic and spit with a force of these F1's horses
and outer space is the only time you left my forces
An MC so ill when I cum I eject hepatitis
so focused in my eye sockets lies the leopard iris
dare to try this, I'll outline your body in lead like animation
and I'm spittin' with a flow so sick like sewer contamination
chopped off ya head and took a picture, now your mind's in a right frame
the verbal firefighter, the way I'm always surrounded by bright flames
got a fiery aura like meteors coming into the Earth's orbit
my rhymes burst for it, to stop my fire you must first forfeit
I'll curb stomp your face to give ya brain a jump start
with punchlines so fluid, the seep through the pores and lump hearts.

by **Darkblade44431** » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:11

Great simile's and metaphors. I'm tired so idk if it was a good topic or had good flow..rofl, but really nice job.

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:30

Thanks both of you! :y:

by **Kez** » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:31

It reminds me of Infinite, not sure why.

Sick stuff :y:

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:32

Thanks Kez :y:

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:37

Scott Macdougall wrote:ok in all seriousness, this is good

Thanks

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:03

Scott Macdougall wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech
grab the mic and spit with a force of these F1's horses
and outer space is the only time you left my forces
An MC so ill when I cum I eject hepatitis
so focused in my eye sockets lies the leopard iris
dare to try this, I'll outline your body in lead like animation
and I'm spittin' with a flow so sick like sewer contamination
chopped off ya head and took a picture, now your mind's in a right frame
the verbal firefighter, the way I'm always surrounded by bright flames
got a fiery aura like meteors coming into the Earth's orbit
my rhymes burst for it, to stop my fire you must first forfeit
I'll curb stomp your face to give ya brain a jump start
with punchlines so fluid, the seep through the pores and lump hearts.

part of infinite
This is the season for noise pollution contamination
Examination of more cartoons than animation
My lamination of narration
Hit's a snare and bass in a track fucked up rapper interrogation
When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing
I turn the stage into a barren wasteland...

looool, basically i'm saying ur just as sick as eminem, good job haha

Holyshit LOL didn't even notice that! Good find! :y:

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:19

Scott Macdougall wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech

that reminds me of the start of 313

I'll have you taken back to Christ when you sacrifice
The way you hacked and sliced when I fill your back with knives.
Jacking life's of MC's, now I'm set to launch a plan
For blowing up the stage with illegal contraband.

you're naturally writing like eminem did in the album infinite... i is the jealous one