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Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

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Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 23rd, '08, 07:32

i can't wait to leave this place and see the change of my leader's face when i reach the gate
cuz i will take my keys and race, i don't need hand shakes, i'll just briefly wave and proceed on straight
being brave i really played but freedom's safe for me, no shame
i've seen the pain and feel more strength, now i'll create from dreams not fake
the scenes to reign not sink, i became unafraid to think and aid the teens, it's great
agree or hate, i bring an aim to sing, no saint like angel wings but danglin strings i aint...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby lilrossy » Dec 23rd, '08, 15:37

goog drop man, it was a good read. it flowed nicely. keep it up. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Dark Blue » Dec 24th, '08, 06:05

woo i like this piece great job
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 24th, '08, 10:07

WIKED SHIT :smoking:
opening lines were pretty nice, good flow to it
Keep 'em comin
Peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 24th, '08, 16:43

thanks to you all and happy holidays!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby James R. » Dec 24th, '08, 17:51

Pretty said all that needed to be said above. Keep it up
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 24th, '08, 18:24

your drops are consistant with good flow and use of vocab
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 30th, '08, 05:08

thanx, should get cpu 2morrow, i wrote some more good stuff for yall
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 13th, '09, 05:56

no, i will record stuff, i dunno about this piece, when i move to wisconsin i promise which is in a few months
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Coming Soon...Coming Soon...You Have No Idea

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 13th, '09, 08:39

it' s wicked man ,, so make it complete ,, the lyrics and rhymes are pretty nice. .flow is sick too.. gd job ,, keep it up bro :y:
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