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Rhythm And Rhymes

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 18:49

I'm the verbal dynamite behind the mic followed by the winding psych
resigning lights with flying strikes resided by the blinding spikes
designing rhymes with architecture as I start my lectures
pick apart conjectures and rip spinal textures with violent lumbar punctures
flowing critical, with an analytical optical, bringing heat like tropical
hurdling over obstacles with a toxic full of steroid enhanced rocket fuel
attack with pocket dual desert eagles, what they spurt is lethal
hurt the feeble with a evil cerebral on a church steeple in front of the people
a mental deceitful, take Satan, inflate him, hit his face and make his eyes turn Asian
frostbite from rhymes turns him Caucasian, pick up the nation
and smash his face in with evasive action, spit fire with jaw traction
crawl back then or I'll cause detraction of your abdomen like 'saw' extraction
my rhymes cause pump-action distraction, blast like the Big Bang
my flow in my big veins, so much the white blood cells have to dig rain
in order to rig lanes, I got the out of this world rhymes like extraterrestrials
and I'm the professor of textual cause' my my texture is so surreal.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Rhythm And Rhymes

Postby James R. » Dec 24th, '08, 19:34

Best multies and vocab I've seen from you. Ill man. Purely ill.
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Re: Rhythm And Rhymes

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 19:41

James R. wrote:Best multies and vocab I've seen from you. Ill man. Purely ill.

Thanks dude. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Rhythm And Rhymes

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 20:42

McMaybe wrote:
James R. wrote:Best multies and vocab I've seen from you. Ill man. Purely ill.



Agreed. Your best in my opinion (so far). Loved it ^.

Thanks dude :y:
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Re: Rhythm And Rhymes

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 01:17

Holy shit that was some wicked skill. Amazing man. 10/10. Great job on the vocab and definitely the great multies. You've always got something slick up your sleeves. More people should check this :y:
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Re: Rhythm And Rhymes

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 25th, '08, 01:18

shadymademe wrote:Holy shit that was some wicked skill. Amazing man. 10/10. Great job on the vocab and definitely the great multies. You've always got something slick up your sleeves. More people should check this :y:

Thanks bro :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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