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Re: Better Than You

Postby Solace » Dec 24th, '08, 23:28

That was dope, consistent and flowed great. Both verse & hook are great. Nice multies as well. When this song is done I'd like to hear it. Oh yeah. 10/10
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Re: Better Than You

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 23:37

shadymademe wrote:That was dope, consistent and flowed great. Both verse & hook are great. Nice multies as well. When this song is done I'd like to hear it. Oh yeah. 10/10

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Re: Better Than You

Postby James R. » Dec 25th, '08, 00:13

Muhfukka tryna steal my shine :shifty:

Lol this shit was radio worthy as usual man. I won't even bother sayin keep it up. I don't think you could drop smtn whack if you tried.
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Re: Better Than You

Postby yoshi » Dec 25th, '08, 00:42

meh.. it became so boring to see you drop top shit every time. you should write something really shitty so we could bitch about it for weeks :shifty:

:y: :y: :y: as always
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Re: Better Than You

Postby yoshi » Dec 25th, '08, 00:53

i can already see the threads.. :o
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Re: Better Than You

Postby mcZu » Dec 25th, '08, 01:39

Seems perfect, wanna hear this. :y:
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Re: Better Than You

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 25th, '08, 04:14

awesome is an understatement :y:
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Re: Better Than You

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 25th, '08, 17:54

it's sick bro ,, really wanna hear this shit recorded ,, keep droppin man .. 10/10 .. :y:
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Re: Better Than You

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 18:06

z_em wrote:it's sick bro ,, really wanna hear this shit recorded ,, keep droppin man .. 10/10 .. :y:

its gunna be on his album :y:
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Re: Better Than You

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 25th, '08, 19:25

daym thats the type of wiked shit, which makes ppl cuss their own abilities, lmao
as rain said :awesome is an understatement
Sick shit :b:
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Re: Better Than You

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 25th, '08, 20:56

99 problems but rapping aint one!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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