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Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 01:52

The perfect creation, it was called a masterpiece,
Epiphany, attacking the weak, a fuckin' catastrophe,
Y'all emcees could never even rap like me,
Attract like me, fuck y'all can't even act like me,
Rhymes going fast indeed on a mad piece,
Finish the rest of your careers, at last peace,
With your sorrows, sad grief and mad beefs,
You got another thing coming your way, yea that's me,
Lyricism and wordplay trapped in my cranium,
Sicker than drinking a can of uranium,
"These rappers suck", well its a wonder why your playing them,
Your insanely dumb, your rhymes are cheap work of a lazy one,
Your gunna fall off, worse than Curtis on a Fack,
It's fucking disgusting, worse than eating a tonne of plaque.
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Re: Bored

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 25th, '08, 02:22

Yet again I see more growth.
Keep working at it bro, a bright future is ahead of you.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Bored

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 02:53

Chet Starr wrote:
shadymademe wrote:i tried to be clam, i tried to be cool
but now im coming straight after you
you shoulda never fucked with me
because you know im crazy
bitch ima kill you just like slim shady
by the way your pussy needs serious shavin
fatass i dont care go eat that hershey you bin cravin
keep that in mind, contemplating
just remember me and yo momma have been mating
didnt ya hear i just dissed you boy
now go along play with your toys
but seriously you shoulda heard what i said
maybe ud listen better if u stopped giving head
now as i stop this crappy verse ima hop in a bed
and rape your mom, sister and maybe brother and dad.


The first thing you wrote on here

damn you have improved alot :o

The piece you wrote was a pretty good battle rap :worship:

We gotta start working on some shit together :smoking:

AHAHAH I remember writing that shittt :laughing: Man thanks :y:

Thanks Anon too :)
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