Possible Verse

[Rain Matrix]

I bring the truth like an Epiphany
your cold az ice when He Spits The Free's
don't let warmongers Restrict Ya Peace
their hoping that beef Remix'll Cease
listen to the way he's Greeted A Greed
dissing Broken Ways before it's Spoken Late
dangerous as an Open Blade when it's Motions Scrape
to any mc Flowing Fake my lyrics put the Coast In Play
rains rhymes wet um up call it Ocean Spray
so where's the Drama At revolution put my town On The Map
my defiance will bring Trauma Fast with a series of Stong Attacks
whenever I hold My Mic I could make fools gold without Pyrite
as I try to Survive Life cuz not to many get to Die Twice

[Solace]

That was nice, some times i got confused on how to flow it since like some lines are a lot longer than others, but im sure you have your own flow to it. Nice multies in it too, i enjoyed it. Didnt understand this line tho : "their hoping that beef Remix'll Cease"

Keep it up

[James R.]

Not bad man. I read it a couple times and I THINK I got the flow down, but it's still a little choppy when you come towards the end. Had some nice similes and a couple decent punchlines too man. Keep it up. In the right song this would be a great verse.

[Requiem]

^some great lines and punches. but basically what they said, flow was a little choppy. but good job man.

lmao, first line was Epiphany, and there's an "Epiphany" in shadymademe's sig

[Slim Zaddy]

it's nice pal .. i like all your punchlines nd multies they are nice .. i could flow with it without complications at all .. i wanna hear this shit .. 9/10

[Rain Matrix]

this is gonna be the first verse on an track I want to do... I want to make it a collab tho
one where my verse comes in finishes and another verse comes right in after like a chain of drops

we could make it the TRshady end of the year remix anyone down?