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Re: Versatile.

Postby James R. » Dec 24th, '08, 02:47

Doposity. Str8 up 10
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Re: Versatile.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 03:03

James R. wrote:Doposity. Str8 up 10

Thanks dude. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile.

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 22:43

MC Anonymous wrote:
Scott Macdougall wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I'm the exorcist poltergeist as vocal as culture fights
pickin' on a dead MC's carcass like a Vulture bite
punchlines push your rib cage up to the back of your neck
with this track I will wreck without the slack of my tech
grab the mic and spit with a force of these F1's horses
and outer space is the only time you left my forces
An MC so ill when I cum I eject hepatitis
so focused in my eye sockets lies the leopard iris
dare to try this, I'll outline your body in lead like animation
and I'm spittin' with a flow so sick like sewer contamination
chopped off ya head and took a picture, now your mind's in a right frame
the verbal firefighter, the way I'm always surrounded by bright flames
got a fiery aura like meteors coming into the Earth's orbit
my rhymes burst for it, to stop my fire you must first forfeit
I'll curb stomp your face to give ya brain a jump start
with punchlines so fluid, the seep through the pores and lump hearts.


part of infinite
This is the season for noise pollution contamination
Examination of more cartoons than animation
My lamination of narration
Hit's a snare and bass in a track fucked up rapper interrogation
When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing
I turn the stage into a barren wasteland...

looool, basically i'm saying ur just as sick as eminem, good job haha :y:

Holyshit LOL didn't even notice that! Good find! :y:

Your amazed that you used 2 same words. :confusion:

Anyways dope piece man, 10/10 :y:

Man i hate giving out 10/10's, but its just so hard not to when i read your pieces.
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Re: Versatile.

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 22:50

Scott Macdougall wrote:
Your amazed that you used 2 same words.


dare to try this, I'll outline your body in lead like animation
and I'm spittin' with a flow so sick like sewer contamination

This is the season for noise pollution contamination
Examination of more cartoons than animation

Yeah i dont see whats amazing in MC & Em rhyming 2 same words (contamination & animation) But yeah a lot of his lines do have that Infinite feel.
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Re: Versatile.

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '08, 22:54

Scott Macdougall wrote:lol who sed it was amazing...? i sed it reminded me of em's infinite stuff....

I didnt say you said it was amazing but MC sounded like he was amazed "
Holyshit LOL didn't even notice that! Good find! :y:"
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