im recordin this shit no matta waat u say

[tjb]

gotta pocket full of cash, flow/arm fulll of smashed, hoes
regular day for a rookie like me/bet ur feelin ambitious when u seenin me be ,seenin me crusin
cuz im up an comin/you down hill loozin
look at u mixed wit all these floozies/meanwhile look like a got life outta a movie
dammn look at all these groupiesss,/ damn bet u feelin real stoopid
yea shot down real quick/ cuz the sky dont like real shit
ima piranah ur gonna get bit/swim quick like your tryin to get fit
to bad you match for me to bad/this is look like a catasphrophe
see, if you gotta catchy chorus/godamn your never askin where the whores at?


yeaaa this is a life of material things/its the shit the inspirtation to singgg
an concentration isnt my main focusss/my words is magic hocus pocus

[Requiem]

not bad, flow was good, and lyrics were decent. didn't rhyme enough to me, but if u can pull it off in audio. go for it

[theJFKshow]

You are trying too much to sound like Tupac, and it isn't working.

[tjb]

You are trying too much to sound like Tupac, and it isn't working.

tupac? haha not what i was goin 4

[tjb]

pop one in theee air yea up toward the sky/all you dudes know im on the ride to die
an this is my 1st race,/but im still aiming for finishin in 1st place
this is my mind set,this is my mental state,/

[Rain Matrix]

the verse was okay but I agree that you have to work on using better rhymes
still not a bad drop

[Solace]

I could really figure out the flow at all. Fix your structure, cause that way its easier to read it (like instead of separating lines with "/" separate it by making it under the other line)

and what i read from (i only read like 2 or 3 lines from it), it did seem Tupac-ish.