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3 Little Pigs

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3 Little Pigs

Postby Requiem » Dec 27th, '08, 23:48

3 little pigs, sittin' in their homes,
when the big bad wolf starts down their road.
1st little pig was on the commode,
while the wolf took a breath and prepared to blow.
All of a sudden, the house began to tilt,
the poor pig fell and his toilet spilt.
the wolf looked him over, and turned away
he wasn't going to eat this piggie today.
so he moved on, and approached a house made of timber,
He set it on fire and blew on the cinders.
The piggie was making dinner when he began to smell smoke.
when the ash became thick, the pig started to choke.
It was then he noticed the flames on his floor,
squealing in terror he ran out the front door.
The wolf grabbed him up, and made a quick meal of him.
He wouldn't bother going to the brick house, until it was time to feed again.

i kinda keystyled that :sweating: lmao, rambled. let me know what u think :happy:
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 27th, '08, 23:50

Lmfao I enjoyed this little story.
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby Requiem » Dec 27th, '08, 23:55

woohoo, thx u guys^ :happy: i might record it now :8)
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby Solace » Dec 28th, '08, 00:39

Simple yet effective, 7/10 :y:
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby Requiem » Dec 28th, '08, 00:46

^thx for the feed :8)
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 28th, '08, 01:32

to quote myself from my song Dedicated - "truthfully I never liked the pigs"
but anyway very creative and definitly worth reading :y:
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby Requiem » Dec 28th, '08, 01:54

ha ha, i never liked the pigs either. that 3rd pig just got it off easy :shifty:

thx for the feed :8)
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 28th, '08, 09:17

haha definately entertaining. very nice for a keystyle too.
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 10:07

ehhhh...not good at all

creative tho,,,but wack... sorry bro
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Re: 3 Little Pigs

Postby Requiem » Dec 28th, '08, 17:11

^lmao everyone's got different tastes, but thx for the feed :flower:
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