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yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 10:34

Fuck Mister Marshall, whos last name is mathers,
If he wouldnt have met dre, the stupid fuck wouldnt even matter,
i slap that blonde hair, till your fuckin scalp is fractured,
the worst mistake you ever made, was ....actin,
cuzz Ive seen better shit, on the news like when stalin was elected,
ya body looks defected, wid that crooked ass nose, lookin like Debo just wrecked it,
lay off the fuckin meth, maybe then you wouldnt make 50 so erected,


hahaha somthing to make the groupies mad,, well the flow sucked so dont even comment on that
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Re: yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 28th, '08, 10:36

haha that debo shit was funny man. i enjoyed this.
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Re: yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 10:37

-[Zach]- wrote:haha that debo shit was funny man. i enjoyed this.

it seems like i always come up with the best lines on the 2nd to last line doesnt it?
hmm wonder what thats about...

but yeah thanks man :y:
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Re: yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 28th, '08, 10:40

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
-[Zach]- wrote:haha that debo shit was funny man. i enjoyed this.

it seems like i always come up with the best lines on the 2nd to last line doesnt it?
hmm wonder what thats about...

but yeah thanks man :y:


your just great at getting those last punches in.
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 10:43

-[Zach]- wrote:
XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
-[Zach]- wrote:haha that debo shit was funny man. i enjoyed this.

it seems like i always come up with the best lines on the 2nd to last line doesnt it?
hmm wonder what thats about...

but yeah thanks man :y:


your just great at getting those last punches in.

yeah i guess so...i always love good endings lol
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Re: yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 28th, '08, 10:45

haha good endings usually make or break the story
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: yeah its that sticcy fuck again

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 28th, '08, 14:48

Lmao yet again very good writing
I was able to pick up the flow so no worries, everything was pretty much there, but you could have came heavier. Still enjoyable none-the-less! :y: 8/10
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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