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Throwing Around Punchlines

Postby Requiem » Dec 28th, '08, 03:00

lmao no punchlines to be found, but it does start like that :8)

throwing around punchlines, aint have much else to do.
so i grabbed shadymademe, and a pack of ky lube
got some whipped cream, tape, scissors, and glue.
slapped some stuff together and made a shady stew.
my aim's to shock and awe until ur face turns navy blue.
and if ur hungry for some rhymes then u can have some gravy too.


i'm gonna add to it later. lmao my brain's on meltdown :confusion:
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Re: Throwing Around Punchlines

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 28th, '08, 09:15

there was a very nice flow to it i thought. kind of short but its all good. very nice.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: Throwing Around Punchlines

Postby Requiem » Dec 28th, '08, 17:09

^thx for the feed man. i was really close to posting Bump :happy:
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