Third Time's a Charm

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 28th, '08, 14:52

Grasp the evil vibes of those angry souls and conceal it
reveal it, let it loose and let the guns feel it
then wield it, let it out of control, just let it go
forget the flow, jump on to the track and just let it blow
as it explodes with the force of jealousy cause' they not me
you can't STOP ME, I'll DROP THESE till' I'm TOP 3
don't COPY my lyrical style, or my way to deliver
consider the source, my flow unique like rivers
I'm here to save Rap from it's damn depression
these lessons comes from my very own profession
and until I die I'll keep pumping lyrics from my own heart
yall have thrown darts, and from that I have grown smart
then what I've shown starts, bullets spray from a AK
the day plays songs of sorrow from my stray ways
gray days come to those who are misunderstood
and under hoods or undergrounds is where the thunder stood
these blunders would cause havoc, but not me
I got these, the rocks freeze like Kraft block cheese
those who are cocky I got these damn techs to blow
check the flow, gliding up and down with respect to show
protect from blows, or I'll destroy you without effort
I spout clever punchlines that will get ya brow severed
however, letters and words don't express emotion
with these motions I spit deeper then three oceans
rhymes flow natural like tree potions, so I see those sins
get angry like orphans and release my mind's endorphins
the door splits, my mind forfeits for four clips
before this came the weed smoke and those whore's clits
the flow's shore rips,and the anger rises with a palm revolver
fill her up with lead until the bullets dissolve her
resolve her? impossible when in these fury enticed rages
and that is shown in the flow when I recite pages.

by **Requiem** » Dec 28th, '08, 17:20

wow, one of ur best yet :y:

i thought the flow was really close to Eminem's second verse on Crack a Bottle. but that's just how i interpreted it :8)

great job with it man, sick rhymes, sick lines, just plain sick! :happy:

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 28th, '08, 17:56

IceKilla wrote:wow, one of ur best yet i thought the flow was really close to Eminem's second verse on Crack a Bottle. but that's just how i interpreted it

great job with it man, sick rhymes, sick lines, just plain sick!

Thanks bro! :y:

by **James R.** » Dec 28th, '08, 18:58

A little more simplistically written than your previous pieces and it flows better than anything you've dropped. Probably in your top 3 best man. Good work.

Website · by **Solace** » Dec 28th, '08, 20:20

Dude that was awesome. Great flow, as James and Ice said. Its one of my faves from you. Sick. Tonight ill feed the audio track you posted of it. Cant fucking wait.

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 28th, '08, 20:39

shadymademe wrote:Dude that was awesome. Great flow, as James and Ice said. Its one of my faves from you. Sick. Tonight ill feed the audio track you posted of it. Cant fucking wait.

thanks bro

by **MC Anonymous** » Dec 28th, '08, 20:59

McMaybe wrote:Your best to date. It was simplified, but well written. The flow was by far the best from you.

Thanks bro! :y:

by **Arabian Shady** » Dec 28th, '08, 21:47

McMaybe wrote:Your best to date. It was simplified, but well written. The flow was by far the best from you.

yep wel summarised, exactly what i wanted to say..
i liked the way you kept it to the theme and still managed to keep it away from bein that COMPLETE egotistical verse, flow was dope, structure was easy to comprehend as well
well written, but i must say i like ur other style better,its quite unique
Peace

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