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Gyeah!

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 28th, '08, 22:21

the Tests of Time have Wrecked my Mind
I'm Set ta Find Death or Crime
trapped in this Head of Mine
I Respect the Grind
maybe I should Get a Dime
and Smoke It so I can Focus
I'm Dope as who Wrote This
a lyrical Full Clip
every words a Bullet
and I'm So Quick no one Noticed
I exploded without a Motive
Devoted to a psycho psychosis
my Brains Caught without a Sane Thought
only constant Rain Drops Falling Down
steady Calling Out whose Ballin Now
can you Hear Me releasing this Fury
I'm Cleary Weary but still Fear Free
the Selfish Relish a place so Hellish
someone Else Is Helpless
but I'm the one who Felt Sick
cuz the truth is Contagious
written on Pages over the Ages
it's Faded into the Matrix
now it shows up on my Playist
my style is straight outrageous
like a Serrated Bladed man who isn't Complacent
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 29th, '08, 00:55

Damn man, that's a lyrical masterpiece, lol. Love the wordplay and the flow was soo smooth, it just felt natural, lol. Really nice drop!

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Re: Gyeah!

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '08, 01:58

Really liked it, Rain Matrix. Some nice wordplay and multies. And the flow was nice too. Good stuff man, good stuff :y:
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 29th, '08, 08:58

you are definately good at them multis man. this was really good. keep it up.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

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Re: Gyeah!

Postby James R. » Dec 29th, '08, 16:56

Nice multies, really impressive wordplay in some spots. Flow was right on the money, read through it flawlessly the first time through. Well thought lyrics, really good effort on this. One of the best drops I've seen in CW. Keep it up man.
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 29th, '08, 17:10

wiked wiked shit man
awesome lyrics James summed it up nice, i agree on all points
dope shit man :worship:
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 29th, '08, 18:24

it's settled then 4:00 in the morning is my new writing time (lol)
there's no time to be tired a got a new track ot record and this verse will be on it

thanks to everybody for the kind words... this just kinda came to me
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 30th, '08, 00:34

i liked the beginning, i see u wrote this dif, it's decent besides the few noticeable typos but i would rewrite some of these lines to be honest
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 30th, '08, 02:06

thanks kaotic and I feel bad if there is any typo's
I recorded it tho it's better than some of my latest
I'll post it soon
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Re: Gyeah!

Postby mcZu » Dec 30th, '08, 18:36

Great piece, enjoyed it.
Can't wait to hear it :y:
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