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Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '08, 07:46

I was pissing and i freestyled this and thought it might be worth posting.

Im the kind of physco-path who would light your ass,
Flammable liquids in mind, a couple cans of gas,
So act fast, you better run, stop, drop & roll,
Someone get the camera, I'm about to start the show,
Ill torture you all day with a bunch of razorblades,
Fuck razorblades, use my fingertips even if it takes all day.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '08, 08:03

Chet Starr wrote:pretty good for a freestyle :y:

Thanks :)
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Re: Freestyle

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 29th, '08, 08:42

like Chet Starr said definately not bad for a freestyle. keep it up man.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: Freestyle

Postby lilrossy » Dec 29th, '08, 15:17

yeah, this is good. i like dat evil twistid shit. keep it up :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '08, 17:16

Thanks both of you :)
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