Steve Spag - Why I Do It

[Steve Spag]

I wrote this awhile back but just found it on my computer downstairs. Not my best piece, but it's got a nice flow to it the way I rap it. Pretty much just a verse about why I do what I do, and no matter what I still got my rap.

they ask me why i do it, is it for fame or chicks?//
i'm just not playing games, and i'm not taking shit//
i'm here to make it big, my pay and all my spliffs//
my name and who i am, it just might take a bit//
but when it's said and done, you will all play my hits//
you will not hate no more, you will all wave and kick//
it is the way of life, you can not change a kid//
who loves his music, it's always at the top of his list//
you can cancel my phone and you could cut off my net//
and you can take away my car but I'll still have my raps//
you can lock me alone and you can take all my cheques//
or you could cancel my cards but I'd still have my pad//
you can keep me at home and you could steal all my Vex's//
you could break my guitar, but I'll still have my pen//
you could cancel my loans and you can ruin my rep//
and you can take my cigars but you can't break my spirit//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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[Arabian Shady]

the idea was told rather well, only it sounded more poetic than a rap verse, flow was ODD at points, but like you get used to it. ALl in all a well written POEM.
PEace

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, much appreciated.

@Arabain Shady: Yeah, the last 8 bars were actually written acapella in poetic form waaaay before I wrote the first 8. I tried matching them up to see how it'd sound, and when it's on the beat it sounds pretty decent, which is why I kept it.

[Rain Matrix]

this was a decent read the problem I found was the ending I didn't see it
but this was pretty good

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks for checkin' it out dude, glad you liked it.

[Solace]

I liked it, not my faves from you but theres nothing wrong with it either.

[-[Zach]-]

very good man. i especially liked the message in it man. keep it up.

[James R.]

Nice man. Well written. Lyrics were enjoyable, flow was right on, very easy read. I liked the message you were sending as well. I really felt like I knew a little more about Steve after I was done. Good job.

[Arabian Shady]

Thanks for the feed guys, much appreciated.

@Arabain Shady: Yeah, the last 8 bars were actually written acapella in poetic form waaaay before I wrote the first 8. I tried matching them up to see how it'd sound, and when it's on the beat it sounds pretty decent, which is why I kept it.

AHH i see, so its like a compilation of 2 moods, only you tried to fuse them together,lol
i read it again tho, they match well,

[Steve Spag]

Nice man. Well written. Lyrics were enjoyable, flow was right on, very easy read. I liked the message you were sending as well. I really felt like I knew a little more about Steve after I was done. Good job.

Thanks for the feed bro, glad you enjoyed it.

[Xray]

Simple but expressive no doubt. Love topics like these, I relate to this piece 100%.

[mcZu]

It has a great flow to it
Lyrics were nice