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Practice

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '08, 20:47

Didnt really try on this one but its just practice so yeah.

I'm done playing, its no longer a game,
You got nothing to save you, you feeling ashamed,
Your bitch crew acting hard like rock,
Your soft like cotton, I'm really hard like cock,
Your rhymes are rotten, I got them in lock,
It's a competition, your McCain & I'm Barack,
So stop, you just got out-rapped and I aint trying,
Get a shovel out cause right now your style is dying,
Bury them, cover them, enshroud them in dirt,
I already took a dump on them, they're deader than Kurt.
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Re: Practice

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 30th, '08, 21:51

lol, decent :y:
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Re: Practice

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '08, 21:54

Thanks man :y:
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Re: Practice

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 30th, '08, 23:32

yeah, it's average :zipped:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Practice

Postby Xray » Dec 30th, '08, 23:38

Practice is good, you definitely can write better so you definitely didn't try, still tops wayne and souljah boy though.
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Re: Practice

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '08, 23:39

Kaotic wrote:yeah, it's average :zipped:

Thanks

Xray wrote:Practice is good, you definitely can write better so you definitely didn't try, still tops wayne and souljah boy though.

But then again, what DOESNT top them? Haha thanks man :y:
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Re: Practice

Postby Xray » Dec 30th, '08, 23:45

shadymademe wrote:
Kaotic wrote:yeah, it's average :zipped:

Thanks

Xray wrote:Practice is good, you definitely can write better so you definitely didn't try, still tops wayne and souljah boy though.

But then again, what DOESNT top them? Haha thanks man :y:


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Re: Practice

Postby Solace » Dec 30th, '08, 23:57

Xray wrote:
shadymademe wrote:
Kaotic wrote:yeah, it's average :zipped:

Thanks

Xray wrote:Practice is good, you definitely can write better so you definitely didn't try, still tops wayne and souljah boy though.

But then again, what DOESNT top them? Haha thanks man :y:


You really wanna know don't you? :shifty:

Kinda :shifty:

Well Charles Hamilton... :whistle:
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