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Putting Something Together

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Putting Something Together

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 30th, '08, 22:38

my Nerves are Shot I Hurt a Lot at First I Thought I Deserved ta Talk
Merc a Drop record the Verse n Stop I've never Heard of Clocks

so before my Time Comes I'm gonna Grind Son untill my Heart Quits
I feel like a Discarded Artist that was never here to Start Shit

however the demons have Found Me they want to claim my Bounty
cuz I speak Profoundly trying to Count These pains Down Deep

my Chest Aches my Breath Tastes Death Laced I mean that in the Best Way
untill my Stress Fades I'll be a Head Case hoping you find my music and Press Play

I Jones for a Mic tho I'm Alone when I Write cuz this is the Home that I Like
you can get Stoned for a Price but if you want beef you'll get Owned in the fight
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Re: Putting Something Together

Postby The GameKeeper » Dec 30th, '08, 22:50

damn... that was one of the best pieces i have seen from you. good work man...
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Re: Putting Something Together

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 00:08

good shit man, keep droppin that stuff for us
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Putting Something Together

Postby neversnooze » Dec 31st, '08, 05:16

this was nice bro you should record it :)
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Re: Putting Something Together

Postby Dark Blue » Dec 31st, '08, 19:37

Kaotic wrote:good shit man, keep droppin that stuff for us


neversnooze wrote:this was nice bro you should record it :)
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: Putting Something Together

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 1st, '09, 22:54

Rain Matrix wrote:my Chest Aches my Breath Tastes Death Laced I mean that in the Best Way
untill my Stress Fades I'll be a Head Case hoping you find my music and Press Play



it's sick bro .. lyrics were very decent , rhymes were 2 .. it flowed great .. nd these lines are jus sick ,, dope drop from ya rain matrix ,.. keep droppin man .. :y: :y:
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