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[tjb]

they say the grass is greener on the other side/ y is it allway meaner on this ride
the worlds alwas offsides like a football game/ lil lopsided cuz evryone, seems to want a claim to fame
an dont even try to go hide in the dark /cuz ur bleedin fear an i smell blood like a shark
yea i wanna leave my mark, so this is not diss, this is an attack rap/ like no hatin on,just rata- tat-tat
an im sick of all these white kids makin black rap/ so i wont join in ill take it out with the 1st stab

[Requiem]

sick shit man. flow was perfect, content was great. if i do say so, those rhymes had SWAG
that smell blood like a shark line was SICK

[Solace]

Flow was meh to me, rhymes were okay, had no multies so i wasnt impressed. Average. ^As ice killa said, the shark line imo was the best line in this.

[Ka0t1c]

i dunno, im not a fan of the rat-a-tat-tat

[MC Anonymous]

Awful, you really need to work on structuring your pieces.
2/10