Time

by **mcZu** » Dec 31st, '08, 20:47

-Time-

Dreams next to the edge, seems courage has frozen
expect to fetch the glass, path has been chosen

Signs and omens, aligned and broken
Minds are open, magnified and stolen

Time moving slow yet it's flying,
hands move too fast time is dying,

the pen can't keep up with the seconds,
the river bedding nearing the ending,

almost midnight, frost and fright
host the fight, freedom or flight

caught in the warm sand, wings are broken
Fought untill the end, the air is choking

face to face with the basilisk
amazed the maze while the catilist

transformed over time into a pen
mashed forward inclining the end

but when I lend the time my power
it sends me sand with extra hours

More of like a poetic piece, feed back is appreciated

by **Slim Zaddy** » Jan 1st, '09, 19:32

sick man ,,, :y:

by **mcZu** » Jan 1st, '09, 20:10

^Thanks for checking it out man, appreciate it. And glad you like it :y:

by **neversnooze** » Jan 2nd, '09, 00:14

mczu this was some nice poetic piece you have written, i liked how you rhymed twice in each line and the next, the flow was written well. the ending gave me like a little chill