My verse for the competition...

[Emadyville]

Damn, that was sick, loved the flow if I even got it right lol, but rhymes were insane, loved the line with 'faces made of porcelain" or whatever, good shit

[Slim Zaddy]

nice man ,, really nice.. concept is good .. rhymes contents is great nd lyriclly it's amazing ,, i wanna see this recorded .. gd job here .. keep it up .

[Arabian Shady]

When i read the topic , i was like " is maybe insane?" lmao! why is he postin his verse so early,lol then it hit me your he judge,lol

flow was pretty unique man, at first i had a hard time gettin it, when i read it again i found that it goes well. rhymes were realy well thought of,
all in all solid drop

what's the definition of using music to paint a portrait...
of pain and torture, gain a force of attainable torque for...
your engine, but the end is when the pages are forced in...
your dead, blank stare and with a face made of porcelain...

Hot and Heavy

[MC Anonymous]

Pretty good, but comparing to your other work it's weak in comparison. 9/10

[James R.]

I loved it man. I've seen you drop better verses, but they were in songs so you had more time to get your point across while this had to be more pointed and you transitioned like a pro. You could've posted it and probably still won. Or maybe come in second to a special guy with a red name Lol jk man. Shit was dope though.

[Steve Spag]

Ah ha, another solid drop as I expected! Not your best piece but it's pretty sick. You always have this crazy vocab. that just blows everyone away and this verse is no exception. Flow was easy to get, sounded good to me, and the rhymes were dope aswell.

Keep it up man!

[Robbie G]

Glad your not in it lol.

I liked this the best;

your dead, blank stare and with a face made of porcelain...
of course it's, just the incubator, late or abortion...
later abort this... taking haters to court... shit...

[Tash8]

i like it, but i couldn't rap it, so it sounded real bad when i said it, so hopefully it sounds better when u do it!

[Solace]

I really like it man, wasnt as good as your other pieces but it was quite good! This line i didnt understand though, im guessing your referencing some story...? "So I relax with... Jim, Jack and the Captain... Captain..."

[Solace]

I really like it man, wasnt as good as your other pieces but it was quite good! This line i didnt understand though, im guessing your referencing some story...? "So I relax with... Jim, Jack and the Captain... Captain..."

Jim Bean, Jack Danial's, Captain Morgan = Alcoholic beverages.


And thanks dude ^

Ahhhh okay i see, thanks i get it now