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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 30th, '08, 05:18

awesome story!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby James R. » Dec 30th, '08, 05:21

Thanks for the comment man!
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby Xray » Dec 31st, '08, 00:07

Thats top notch story telling, like Maybe said I pictured every line and I'm usually the guy that doesn't get much lol so shit's insane. 10/10 on all levels.
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby James R. » Dec 31st, '08, 01:31

Xray wrote:Thats top notch story telling, like Maybe said I pictured every line and I'm usually the guy that doesn't get much lol so shit's insane. 10/10 on all levels.

Thanks man I appreciate it :)
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby 4D » Jan 2nd, '09, 21:17

Haha, good stuff James as per usual. You were nicely caught out there by mcZu though, you should try and fix that if possible, it did seem to happen pretty fast. You had some funny ass lines in there man (Ilol'd when you rhymed optical with Hospital :8) ), and it was an entertaining story, nice wee twist at the end with Maybe, lol.

Keep up the awesomeness.
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby James R. » Jan 3rd, '09, 01:58

Hahah thanks for checkin man. You need to start droppin more often. I changed him from being out in 3 weeks to 4 months so she's about 8 months when she gives birth to our beloved admin.
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby Tash8 » Jan 3rd, '09, 02:05

it was cool man, not gonna dick suck you like everyone else but...

some of it sounded real corny, something I'd hear a little gay kid on the side saying.

it had some sick rhyming and the story was pretty funny but it just wasnt an amazing thing like everyone else is saying.
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby James R. » Jan 3rd, '09, 02:06

Tash8 wrote:it was cool man, not gonna dick suck you like everyone else but...

some of it sounded real corny, something I'd hear a little gay kid on the side saying.

it had some sick rhyming and the story was pretty funny but it just wasnt an amazing thing like everyone else is saying.

You'll dick suck or you'll be outta my sig again!

Lol thanks for checkin tho man. I appreciate the honesty.
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby noel » Jan 4th, '09, 06:19

Very Very funny!!!!

It made my afternoon :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby James R. » Jan 4th, '09, 06:26

Haha glad I could be of service man. Thanks for checkin it.
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Re: Confession of Conception

Postby noel » Jan 4th, '09, 06:35

James R. wrote:Haha glad I could be of service man. Thanks for checkin it.



Your welcome :flower: :flower: :flower:

*still laughing...- had to come back and read it again*
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