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Technical

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 7th, '09, 04:34

Lyrically delirious, intricate kinetics created with telekinetic epidemics
periodical optical droplets of imagery circulate around pyrotechnics
a dialectic thesis that sees this opportunity to attack with rhythm purity
constructed through obscurity, these words you see arn't new to me
a few of these quantifiable styles stretch for miles of literature depth
take a breath and awake in death, keep killin' till no wake is left
the sickest failure antibiotic injected to the bionic frame of dynamics
allows me to travel through time without the fear of loss or panic
I can't stand it, these nomadic three dimensional graphics are problematic
because the mathematics and schematics can't account for lyrical static
individual tatics try to assassinate where the intelligence originates
my relevance participates in the prolific lyrical shower to eliminate
and disintegrate wackness from the face of the earth, since birth
my thirst for a symmetrical intellectual has never been acceptable, but a curse
what's worse is, every potential letter carries my four dimensional energy
enough to bend two sees, enough to burn anyone who stands next to me.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Technical

Postby James R. » Jan 7th, '09, 05:49

This is that classic MC Anonymous shit. I'm feelin it man. Amazing vocab and great rhyming.
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Re: Technical

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 7th, '09, 06:00

i like the message :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Technical

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 7th, '09, 10:15

yo man , i agree with my bro's over here,, it's sick , i can feel it ,good rhymes and lyrics .. gd job bro .. keep it up . :y:
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Re: Technical

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 7th, '09, 16:37

Thanks dudes.:y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Technical

Postby Robbie G » Jan 7th, '09, 17:53

damn dude, that was so complex I had a hard time reading it. :p
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Re: Technical

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 7th, '09, 18:37

Shady Babie wrote:damn dude, that was so complex I had a hard time reading it. :p

Ahaha :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Technical

Postby Emadyville » Jan 8th, '09, 12:03

Not impressed with the rhymes...because I'm so used to them being insane so I expect it anymore haha, but this had a very good message in it :y: :y:
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