Nice Guys Are Hurt {Feat. Neversnooze} New Shit

[Slim Zaddy]

Me and Neversnooze have decided to do a collab , and we have come up with this topic (nice guys are hurt) . so guys feedback would be much appreciated...

Z_em (Verse)

When everything is seen clearly your eyes become teary. Cause you know how,
It would feel to die now and nothing can express how you feel, ya just shout,
And no matter what happens there is no actions that can make you feel,
Like everyone is for real time makes wounds heal?. I don’t think that’s the deal,
And nothing can hide how I feel on the inside all hurt and torn,
I could have sworn that it was real missing his touch that was warm,
I trust them but in the end all we were .was just friends,
And no one had a hand to lend I guess that’s why things were meant to be pretend,
Now im left here face full of tears just feeling down,
I just drift away eyes in a gaze. Cause in my sorrow I drown,


Neversnooze (verse)

Seeing through you was as clear as water, the formula was polluted,
With less hydrogen and oxygen and more deceit that is carbonated,
When this particle is swallowed like our waste disposal sewage,
You have taken the benefit of the kindness and now I am poisoned,
The only treatment is to drain you out, my way of releasing this bad liquid,
I have this publicized exposing your kind, now you are filtered,

(Chorus x2)

cuz Nice guys always finish last, Like your a peice of trash,
Your the guy that gets bashed, never the perfect match,
cuz nice guys finish last, always strapped for cash,
tryin to live, but life changes all to fast,
Always feeling down, speaking but with no sound,
Heart left unfound, Cause Nice Guys finish last now,

Neversnooze (verse 2)

To feel affection was like a manufactured automobile engine,
When the passion is pumping in and out so is my cylinder pistons,
The burning desire builds up as if we were in combustion,
The flames were sheltered due to unsteady balance of betrayal,
As it was hard to turn like my crankshaft lost its leverage,
As I was once a nice guy, currently overheated without the vengeance,
I could take no more of this pain, my engine has exploded,

Z_em (Verse 2)

When will this shit end, all the discrimination against u but they still call u a friend,
But it’s all pretend, and people always tell you to put it back into the past tense,
Like that saying forgive and forget, it’s something I’ve lived my life by,but it always fails in da end,
so the question runs deep, inside my veins , like a secreted venom slowly poisoning me,
will things ever be da same as my younger days cuz dis life shits lame,nd I’m always takin da blame,
Can’t cry because my tears are so dried from all the shame, and the pain, that rips me away,
Trying to make me insane, but I can’t awake, cuz this dream has me enslaved,
Doomed to run my course of life through, until my time is overdue,
And it’ll be a revelation, when I finally come to, so fuck u and all the rest of u,
Cuz nice guys always come last in da race of life,never able to break through that thick sheet of ice,

(Chorus x2 )

cuz Nice guys always finish last, like your a peice of trash,
Your the guy that gets bashed, never the perfect match,
cuz nice guys finish last, always strapped for cash,
tryin to live, but life changes all to fast,
Always feeling down, speaking but with no sound,
Heart left unfound, Cause Nice Guys finish last now,

[Arabian Shady]

this was well intresting,
Z's opening verse was good, nuthin too much but it fits as the begining but neva snooze's thing didnt flow man i mean "bad liquid" & " filtered" dont even rhyme properly,
snooze your second was was ayte dint have flow problems with it, but Z your structure was fuked up, you had all these changing patterns with unequal bars,there was no or very little flow to it
i understood the message tho, nice thing to write on, no doubt but you might not want to write seperately and post, a collabo means you feel of the other guy, in the sense that the second ( and soo on...) verse is like a continuation of what the first guys trying to say, it could be in an individual's style tho.
what i'm basically sayin is that this wasnt put down properly, it was like Z and snooze wrote a verse and then put down a chorus and they did the second verse and ended it, all without checkin if the whole thing meshed or not.ya digg??
it was a good effort all in all, i aint put ya'll down but its just my opinion
Peace

[Slim Zaddy]

this was well intresting,
Z's opening verse was good, nuthin too much but it fits as the begining but neva snooze's thing didnt flow man i mean "bad liquid" & " filtered" dont even rhyme properly,
snooze your second was was ayte dint have flow problems with it, but Z your structure was fuked up, you had all these changing patterns with unequal bars,there was no or very little flow to it
i understood the message tho, nice thing to write on, no doubt but you might not want to write seperately and post, a collabo means you feel of the other guy, in the sense that the second ( and soo on...) verse is like a continuation of what the first guys trying to say, it could be in an individual's style tho.
what i'm basically sayin is that this wasnt put down properly, it was like Z and snooze wrote a verse and then put down a chorus and they did the second verse and ended it, all without checkin if the whole thing meshed or not.ya digg??
it was a good effort all in all, i aint put ya'll down but its just my opinion
Peace

wow ,, thanks man for the long feed , but actually we meant to do it like that , each one of us should write his verses alone then post it . cuz we want to show different styles and thoughts over this topic ,, so this thing was done in purpose from us actually .. . and thanks man for checkin in .. much appreciated

[Ka0t1c]

so far i just read neversnooze's verses and i thought they were amazing, it wasn't about rhyming but very deep poetially how he used relating words for polluted water & an engine.

[neversnooze]

thanks arab and kaotic, its something new me and z_em tried out but next time we should pay closer attention to each others words

[Arabian Shady]

so far i just read neversnooze's verses and i thought they were amazing, it wasn't about rhyming but very deep poetially how he used relating words for polluted water & an engine.

yeah i understood that, but a collaboration is done to produce a product which is much better than what each individual can do, if the final product is exactly what the two have allready done, whats the point of a collabo? but it was an intresting thing to each the pollution and engine bits put up like that

thanks arab and kaotic, its something new me and z_em tried out but next time we should pay closer attention to each others words

lol thats how we learn man, atleast you put up a collabo, you can polish yourself as you go along ..but upgrading afyet each drop is the key,if you do that , you have success
Gd luck

[Slim Zaddy]

so far i just read neversnooze's verses and i thought they were amazing, it wasn't about rhyming but very deep poetially how he used relating words for polluted water & an engine.

yeah i understood that, but a collaboration is done to produce a product which is much better than what each individual can do, if the final product is exactly what the two have allready done, whats the point of a collabo? but it was an intresting thing to each the pollution and engine bits put up like that

thanks arab and kaotic, its something new me and z_em tried out but next time we should pay closer attention to each others words

lol thats how we learn man, atleast you put up a collabo, you can polish yourself as you go along ..but upgrading afyet each drop is the key,if you do that , you have success
Gd luck

hahahha man. we will not polish ourselves .. , nah its okay man .. much appreciated man for checkin it out .. and i think you're 100% right here .. we though it will be good like wit 2 different styles .. but it wont . .. so ya wait for the next collab .. it's gonna be something special ..

[neb121]

that was good.

nice girls finish last too

but liked it alot.

[Slim Zaddy]

that was good.

nice girls finish last too

but liked it alot.

ya sometimes . actually both of us dont woory , and thanks ..