Coleon vs Z_Em (Finished Finally)

[Solace]

That was funny^ Good job, ill vote when Z posts his

[Slim Zaddy]

ohh damn man 16 lines is too long , it take alot of time .. but anyway here's mine though ...

You claiming that you're sick? Well, this verse is a GET WELL letter,
My bars will ring ya head, and leave ya heated . . . like Bell Peppers,
Your bars are all the same, I'll de-crown you and sit back in my throne,
I read your verse and coulda swore your lines were Attack of the Clones,
I'm quick to web this cat coleon and make him enter-nets like he's site-based,
coleon is a newbie who I won't give the light of day like I'm night shade ,
You're fucking with an ace, now you're dropping your hand to swap cards,
Bigheaded coleon is thinking he famous . . . while I drop bars that rock-stars,
I'm pissed it's like, look what God gave you it's a trip to sight,
Fuck the gift to write, I can't believe you gotaway with the gift of life,
I should mention I'm thrashin heads. n' ain't nothin to defend again,
while you should be busy hatchin eggs aka warming the bench for Hens,
Warm you're fake n' I'm felt. and thats the reason I'm takin the belt,
yeah you been recording some wins, but those tapes of my season ain't gonna help,
Ending your dreams of a win... Shattered As Dropped-Glasses ,
I dropped a half verse but and you still couldnt surpass this,

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[Solace]

FLOW - Colean
STRUCTURE - Colean
PUNCHES -z_em
MULTIES -z_em
RHYMES - z_em
VOCAB - Tie
COMPLEXITY - z_em
NAMEPLAY - N/A
WORDPLAY - z_em
PERSONALS - N/A

z_em gets my vote, that was dope man.

[Slim Zaddy]

Good verse, votes are open now, I didn't think it was legal to flip on this site though

man plz i dont mean to disrespect you or somthin by mentioning your name , all respect toy you bro it's just a rap battle man,, and if you want me to erase your name out of i will . peace bro , it was a good a battle though ,,

[Slim Zaddy]

FLOW - Colean
STRUCTURE - Colean
PUNCHES -z_em
MULTIES -z_em
RHYMES - z_em
VOCAB - Tie
COMPLEXITY - z_em
NAMEPLAY - N/A
WORDPLAY - z_em
PERSONALS - N/A

z_em gets my vote, that was dope man.

thanks for the vote shademademe

[Solace]

Don't worry, we all lose our first battle

i didnt lose mine

[Slim Zaddy]

okay guys need more votes over here ..

[emlover07]

my opinion:

FLOW - z_em
STRUCTURE - coleon
PUNCHES - z_em
MULTIES - n/a
RHYMES - z_em
VOCAB - coleon
COMPLEXITY - z_em
CREATIVITY - z_em

my vote for z_em
good job

[Slim Zaddy]

my opinion:

FLOW - z_em
STRUCTURE - coleon
PUNCHES - z_em
MULTIES - n/a
RHYMES - z_em
VOCAB - coleon
COMPLEXITY - z_em
CREATIVITY - z_em

my vote for z_em
good job

thanks for the vote .. finnaly this should be closed .. gd job here colean .. now re-edit it bro ..

[Slim Zaddy]

jeeze thank gosh it's finally over, lookin back man i had problems.....mad problems lol.....closing

ya you're much better know . i should be careful when i battle you next time ,.

[Slim Zaddy]

I'm a bit better at battling but creative writing is my dig for real

inspiration is so much more plentiful when i don't have to concentrate on punches and stuff lol

ya i could see that ,, you hve some great pieces over there .. much improvement since you came here ,, that's the real inspiration .. gd luck bro .. but i will battle you again once i finished with Rain Matrix .. so how about that .. let's do it just for fun

[Slim Zaddy]

i'm up for it, just pm me sometime in the next couple of days

you got it