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Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 10th, '09, 01:35

Anonymous breaking barriers, a virus carrier of brilliance
I fill this shit with the illest skill, against all odds and past guidance
typical violence hide fists, whip out the gat and explode, my mind implodes
in a mode of savage dissection, ravage directions with explosive nodes
who's next, I put yall posse in a crew hex, bless with voodoo text
who knew that I'll crucifix my lyrics when I pierce the paper on the desk
even bullet proof vests can't block punchline divinity, I'm a lyrical trinity
a metaphor, simile, punchline symphony, easily gettin' record spin for me
bomb this track like Vietnamese to a train, a lyrical decease impervious to pleas
and like the universe, I blow up when my lyrics reach 100 trillion trillion degrees

Viens pump ink, heart pumps adrenaline, vicious combination
multiplied by passion. amplified by traction, and simplified for the nation
mental deflation is unacceptable for a mental individual with a 920 visual
rhythm defalcations on tracks is despicable, where the FUCK is your lyrics
my view is spherical, geometric connections to the planetary grid of energy
allows me to speak figuratively in a sense of those who own immortality
you may take my words as fallacy, but honestly, who can speak with this coherency
and still be wrong mentally, it's impossible so I hope you are hearing me clearly
not to make you fear me, but understand my words, DAMNIT, I'm talking to a wall
stalkin in a hall with a pocket uzi ready to reveal itself and shatter you all.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 10th, '09, 01:55

Chet Starr wrote:title didn't lie...dope shit as always professor :y:

Thanks dude, and LOL@ professor.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby Solace » Jan 10th, '09, 02:08

Yeah man that was great! Cept the first two lines kinda threw me off at the start cause it kinda sounded weird (brilliance, guidance). Keep it up man great stuff :y:
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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 10th, '09, 03:44

damn title says it all... you went hard (no homo) :y:
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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 10th, '09, 03:46

Thanks both of ya dudes
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby James R. » Jan 11th, '09, 01:51

Can't call you a liar. This shit was vicious.
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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby Ice_Scarred » Jan 11th, '09, 04:00

Dammmm.....
You sorta remind me of my man Canibus in a way.....probably your vivid vocab. You always find a way to murder your verses. I wish I had your lyrical skill man!
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Re: Vicious Lyrical Slaughter.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 11th, '09, 04:11

Ice_Scarred wrote:Dammmm.....
You sorta remind me of my man Canibus in a way.....probably your vivid vocab. You always find a way to murder your verses. I wish I had your lyrical skill man!

Wow dude, thanks for the compliments man!
Keep practicing, you'll get there! :y: :y:
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