gone thru

[Ka0t1c]

who could put up with what i've gone thru
well you can shut up because it's not you

yes, many would give up when they'd come to
this level which i've drawn up, don't stop-do

you really wanna pick up or get dropped, hmm?
cause you're looking like you are just very stuck-soon

you should not be pushing your luck-doom
is nearing, then you're fucked so hear me out...



these are old lyrics i just wanna show

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked this too , i could flow through it fine , and i liked the way you rhymed words , gd job ..

[Solace]

I didnt like it at all, which is unusual since your Kaotic and i usually enjoy your writings Well its old so yeah, i cant blame you (unless old to you is like 2-3 weeks)

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

I didnt like it at all, which is unusual since your Kaotic and i usually enjoy your writings Well its old so yeah, i cant blame you (unless old to you is like 2-3 weeks)

yuh, what homeboy said...

[Ka0t1c]

its very old like 2 years

[Rain Matrix]

it had a poetic feel which is pretty consistant with your work, it wasn't your best
but you were right to think it wasn't a throw away piece either

[Ka0t1c]

Thanx thamx thanx z_em & Rain! for everyone else maybe i should have finished it but this piece is motivational