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Sunnin the day >0<

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 10th, '09, 06:33

I’m like a wrapper for my soul behold my body an arrow shared flow be careful might hit you with a barrel might turn into a werewolf tonight hit me with the silver bullet make a spark of light served on a silver platter the made life a wrapper for my soul come on it matters Black Rob like Whoa food for the soul stay on cruise control or lose control on the undertow keep it under the tone word born search more word galore I poor on the current permanent want more what do you call a fish with no eyes forget crossed FSHHHH ut the fuck up lets ride

Sunnin the day runnin away from the pain though embraced just gotta stay up keep chased yo it lets me know I’m alive not fading into grey lets go on a ride tonight this the beginning of the rest of our lives infinity the pilot light dope scope silent night no sirens in mine my life my rights are being used with might
The truth is mine tell it in my mind so you can’t use it for grim prime suspect for your life on the line

Get the jist the is just for shit’s a gigs give me the list my name on it here last one promise see for yourself stickered my name in the line I’m ominous bombin it lobbin off the phosphorous positive with logicative polished with proper promises proper fucker nutter butter wut up brother tanner than another
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Re: Sunnin the day >0<

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 10th, '09, 12:01

is this supposed to rhyme . man fix the structure ..
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Re: Sunnin the day >0<

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 10th, '09, 17:42

my bad...I’m like a wrapper for my soul, behold
my body an arrow, shared flow, be careful
might hit you with a barrel, might turn into a werewolf...tonight
hit me with the silver bullet make a spark of light
served on a silver platter the made life
a wrapper for my soul, come on it matters Black Rob like Whoa
food for the soul, stay on cruise control or lose control, on the undertow
keep it under the tone, word born
search more, word galore, I poor on the current
permanent
Sunnin the day
runnin away from the pain
though embraced just gotta stay...up
keep chased, yo it lets me know I’m alive not fading into grey...fuck
lets go on a ride tonight this the beginning of the rest of our lives
infinity turn on the pilot light
Enter the Journey dope scope silent night
no sirens in mine

forget the last part it doesn't make any damn sense in any sense so I didn't put it on the new print
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