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Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

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1
7
33%
2
0
No votes
3
1
5%
4
3
14%
5
1
5%
6
2
10%
7
2
10%
8
1
5%
9
1
5%
10
3
14%
 
Total votes : 21

Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby Solace » Jan 10th, '09, 19:52

omfg this is hard theres so many good entires :'(
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby Mc Cubz » Jan 10th, '09, 19:59

alls good - I'm jut not sure about no.10 - wasn't it 16bars?

Also maybe - itl take you a while to mix down my audio (thanks btw) - I'm not massively pleased with it anyway so am I allowed to use the lyrics to enter the text competition aswell - In the unlikely situation of winning both - we could just let me have the audio.
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby Robbie G » Jan 10th, '09, 21:05

7 way tie. :o
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby noel » Jan 11th, '09, 03:45

I voted no 1 as my casting vote. It wasn't my favourite and I don't think I would listen to it much but It felt so powerful that I had a chill running up my spine reading that shit.

The 3rd one would have been my second vote- I liked it overall and I like the references.

The 5th one would have been my 3rd vote- i liked the overall concept and imagery.

Other highlights also included no 7- it made me understand multi's more (I am quite naive you know) so thanks!!

No 10- I liked the chorus :happy:

Overall thanks, it was good reading them.

And to everyone who submitted something- :hooray: :hooray: :hooray:
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 11th, '09, 10:05

those were some good writing's .. i did vote ..
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby 4D » Jan 11th, '09, 15:11

No. 7 had a great grasp of multi's, and really made as good effort at it. But it felt a little forced at some points, especially when you started rhyming the whole line, the flow was fucked then. But you came second, my vote went to verse 4 though, great flow, and good rhymes and multi's. Plus, it had a chorus, pretty good one too. :y:
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby Urban Punk » Jan 12th, '09, 15:37

tbh I liked them all, though I pick number 4... had great vocab and i loved the flow dude
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby James R. » Jan 13th, '09, 15:16

we need 10 more votes. bump.
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby yoshi » Jan 13th, '09, 15:20

me voted^^
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby James R. » Jan 13th, '09, 17:07

McMaybe wrote:
yoshi wrote:me voted^^



We might as well shut the competition down, only Yoshi's vote matters anyway.

Word. I dunno if there are 9 more people active in this section that would vote. *Worries*
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby 4D » Jan 13th, '09, 17:56

4D wrote:No. 7 had a great grasp of multi's, and really made as good effort at it. But it felt a little forced at some points, especially when you started rhyming the whole line, the flow was fucked then. But you came second, my vote went to verse 4 though, great flow, and good rhymes and multi's. Plus, it had a chorus, pretty good one too. :y:


Weird, I just read over the verse I voted for (no. 4) and can't find what I thought was good about it. I must've been in a stupid mood. But, I have to admit, on a second glance, none are sticking out as a clear winner. Sorry fella's.
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby mcZu » Jan 13th, '09, 18:18

One hell of a competition man.. more people need to vote :y:
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby yoshi » Jan 13th, '09, 21:35

McMaybe wrote:
yoshi wrote:me voted^^



We might as well shut the competition down, only Yoshi's vote matters anyway.


i sensed a drop of sarcasm.. but then i thought: how could one be so sarcastic about my greatness? and pushed the thought back in the gloomy depths of my divine mind.
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Re: Competition Voting - VOTE NOW

Postby Robbie G » Jan 14th, '09, 00:30

Who's number 1? It's basically over now.
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