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quick verse

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 11th, '09, 00:45

this is a verse i never kept working with check it out

the stars arent shining tonight nothing but shadows
suicidal teenagers, and hypoctritical adults
the teachers smiling but the whole fucking class knows
if the cops come, hes hiding crack up his asshole
learn to read and write, get to know your arithmatic
misbehave kids, and be labeled troubled and imputent
disobedient, raped, drugged, we were so inneocent
then we got born, its a fucking sick world isnt it
susies insecure... susies immature .....
susies numbed for sure when her mothers buried in the dirt
james was great, james went insane
because james couldnt face the women he raped
its all one motion, the edge to my wrist, head on my pillow
my ex girlfriends crying, shes calling my cellphone
i was so high last nigh nigga, but dammit i felt low
i'm an over obsessive helpless romantic, hello
welcome, take a seat, while your waiting pray for me
i havent made sense in days, maybe weeks
i wouldnt even be here, if i'd stop fucking fainting
so i could pop a couple extra pills, call me crazy
i keep telling the angel of death, to give me a hand
his sick sense of humor keeps giving me another chance
your probably wondering who the fuck i am
i couldnt say listen to my music, maybe you'll understand
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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Re: quick verse

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 11th, '09, 02:26

word man, thanks and i will :shifty:
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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