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Untitled (not finished) first and second verse only

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Re: Untitled (not finished) first and part of second verse only

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 11th, '09, 02:40

this is mad good, word, definitly keep it up
liked the lyics and the flow
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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Re: Untitled (not finished) first and part of second verse only

Postby lilrossy » Jan 11th, '09, 03:15

nice drop man. i really like the structure of it. good work. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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