TRShady Diss

[Evan C.]

This website is nothing if not ridiculous
Half of you think Em's Encore garbage was inconspicuous
I mean, really how dumb do have to be?
It's a struggle to name one good track of his since 2003
And conversely, if you talk him up too much after you're called a "Stan"
in their prime who was better? Oh yeah, every black rapper in the land
Every time I log on I can't avoid rolling eyes
It's like the most annoying poster gets a trolling prize
And how hard is it to CAP-I-TAL-IZE?
I know you're all hard, but who you foolin' with the ebonics, guys?
TrShady, a place for eighty dipshit denizens
This rap's like rabies, soon the damage will be setting in
In that case, someone better be ready quick with medicine
Fuck, I'm done, until we meet again...

[Emadyville]

need a hobby

And you're on TR then why? haha

[Slim Zaddy]

need a hobby

And you're on TR then why? haha

[Evan C.]

So is anyone going to actually critique the lyrics or what?

[Emadyville]

Doubtful

[Boston]

it was decent but idk why you brought race into it

i'd eat you alive

[Robbie G]

It was alright, but it was pretty simple.

Also this should be in Creative Writing.

[MC Anonymous]

This website is nothing if not ridiculous
Half of you think Em's Encore garbage was inconspicuous
I mean, really how dumb do have to be?
It's a struggle to name one good track of his since 2003
And conversely, if you talk him up too much after you're called a "Stan"
in their prime who was better? Oh yeah, every black rapper in the land
Every time I log on I can't avoid rolling eyes
It's like the most annoying poster gets a trolling prize
And how hard is it to CAP-I-TAL-IZE?
I know you're all hard, but who you foolin' with the ebonics, guys?
TrShady, a place for eighty dipshit denizens
This rap's like rabies, soon the damage will be setting in
In that case, someone better be ready quick with medicine
Fuck, I'm done, until we meet again...

Garbage. Don't bite something you're unable to chew, fuck around see what happens.

[MC Anonymous]

I read that and thought it was just bantering, then someone pointed out it kinda rhymed, judging by this guys lyrical skill he probably spent a week listening to Soulja Boy and Lil Wayne to write that.

You got MSN? I may propose a cypher.

[Solace]

That was utter shit.

[James R.]

I mean it was whack as hell and is posted in the wrong section. The flow was quite off, the race thing was ineffective, the rhymes were elementary, the concept was ok if you're bored, high, drunk, and suffering from a terminal illness or mental disability. But if you're not then it was just dumb. I'd say scrap it, delete the thread, and forget you ever wrote it. But hey keep practicing. Maybe you'll be average one day.

[Evan C.]

This website is nothing if not ridiculous
Half of you think Em's Encore garbage was inconspicuous
I mean, really how dumb do have to be?
It's a struggle to name one good track of his since 2003
And conversely, if you talk him up too much after you're called a "Stan"
in their prime who was better? Oh yeah, every black rapper in the land
Every time I log on I can't avoid rolling eyes
It's like the most annoying poster gets a trolling prize
And how hard is it to CAP-I-TAL-IZE?
I know you're all hard, but who you foolin' with the ebonics, guys?
TrShady, a place for eighty dipshit denizens
This rap's like rabies, soon the damage will be setting in
In that case, someone better be ready quick with medicine
Fuck, I'm done, until we meet again...

Garbage. Don't bite something you're unable to chew, fuck around see what happens.

LMAO, you're trying hard to put out that "straight gangster" vibe, aren't you?

[Brandon S]

This website is nothing if not ridiculous
Half of you think Em's Encore garbage was inconspicuous
I mean, really how dumb do have to be?
It's a struggle to name one good track of his since 2003
And conversely, if you talk him up too much after you're called a "Stan"
in their prime who was better? Oh yeah, every black rapper in the land
Every time I log on I can't avoid rolling eyes
It's like the most annoying poster gets a trolling prize
And how hard is it to CAP-I-TAL-IZE?
I know you're all hard, but who you foolin' with the ebonics, guys?
TrShady, a place for eighty dipshit denizens
This rap's like rabies, soon the damage will be setting in
In that case, someone better be ready quick with medicine
Fuck, I'm done, until we meet again...

Garbage. Don't bite something you're unable to chew, fuck around see what happens.

LMAO, you're trying hard to put out that "straight gangster" vibe, aren't you?

Your embarrasing

[<Stiiccy>]

lmfao wtf dude

[Emadyville]

This may be the most retarded and hilarious topic ever