NEW Steve Spag - Sightless (Good Read)

[Steve Spag]

Just finished writing this piece right now. The beat is called "Sightless" by Anno Domini on Soundclick if anyone's interested in checkin'. The flow is pretty different, gets really fast at times. Some of the lyrics may not look like they rhyme at times, but they sound fine the way I pronounce them. Anyways, let me know what ya' think, any and all feed is appreciated!

i get in a certain mood and i can't snap out it//
it's worse for you 'cause i don't have to yell shit//
to move right through 'cause your ass is selfish//
you could choose your crew and we'll bash in public//
you're helpless, sittin' at the bottom and meltin'//
i felt that wrath and you'll amount to nothin//
i'm dealt in, but i ain't even seen my cards//
and you're mouthin' off because it seems i'm soft//
and i don't even really know which team you're on//
so what's the point of beefin', why you schemein' hard?//
i know your boys are dreamin' they will freeze a star//
but they ain't seein' me 'cause i have peaced and gone//
so now i'm free like a egeals arm//
gets to soar the sky like it don't need support//
you wonder why i just breathe this sport//
'cause it's meant to be for me to please them all//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2009

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[noel]

Just finished writing this piece right now. The beat is called "Sightless" by Anno Domini on Soundclick if anyone's interested in checkin'. The flow is pretty different, gets really fast at times. Some of the lyrics may not look like they rhyme at times, but they sound fine the way I pronounce them. Anyways, let me know what ya' think, any and all feed is appreciated!

i get in a certain mood and i can't snap out it//
it's worse for you 'cause i don't have to yell shit//
to move right through 'cause your ass is selfish//
you could choose your crew and we'll bash in public//
you're helpless, sittin' at the bottom and meltin'//
i felt that wrath and you'll amount to nothin//
i'm dealt in, but i ain't even seen my cards//
and you're mouthin' off because it seems i'm soft//
and i don't even really know which team you're on//
so what's the point of beefin', why you schemein' hard?//
i know your boys are dreamin' they will freeze a star//
but they ain't seein' me 'cause i have peaced and gone//
so now i'm free like a egeals arm//
gets to soar the sky like it don't need support//
you wonder why i just breathe this sport//
'cause it's meant to be for me to please them all//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2009

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I just read the words without the music but I like it!!

[Solace]

Couldnt catch the flow very well but it was a good read nevertheless. I liked the beat it went to, thought it would be more complex so you must be flowing it in a complicated way...if you get what i mean lol

Liked this part:

so what's the point of beefin', why you schemein' hard?//
i know your boys are dreamin' they will freeze a star//
but they ain't seein' me 'cause i have peaced and gone//
so now i'm free like a egeals arm//
gets to soar the sky like it don't need support//
you wonder why i just breathe this sport//
'cause it's meant to be for me to please them all//

Good drop

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks man, much appreciated.
And yeah, you let me know on MSN a couple days ago, haha.


Keep the feed comin' please!

[Ice_Scarred]

Great drop dude! Nice rhyming there bro, you definitely have some talent. 8/10

[Steve Spag]

Great drop dude! Nice rhyming there bro, you definitely have some talent. 8/10

Thanks man, much respect.

[neversnooze]

when i read it, it flowed quite well and i guess i pronounced the words like you because i got it to rhyme lol

overall i like your stuff, its simple to understand. your similes/metaphors are like everyday materials

[Ka0t1c]

i know u got talent but this seems you didn't try hard enough on it, it's still good but i'd expect better from you...

[slimsoxshady]

good shit ma man, its thought provoking thats good, u got another verse or two to this?

[Steve Spag]

good shit ma man, its thought provoking thats good, u got another verse or two to this?

Thanks man, I appreciate it. I actually JUST finished writing the 2nd verse for it, and I'm really liking the way it turned out. The way it's going, I think I'm gonna put this on my LP.

[MC Anonymous]

i know u got talent but this seems you didn't try hard enough on it, it's still good but i'd expect better from you...