I Love You.....

[MC Anonymous]

I awoke, pain and agony infested my soul
rejected the bold, remained as black as coal
I love you, I need you, baby please come back
I'll continue to plead until air leaves my lung sacks
what I sung back then, it means nothing now
but I'll make our love mean something now
I've awaken, my soul has shattered for you
I'll rip my heart out so you can feel my core too
I'm nothing without us, without we, I need you
I don't bleed blue, I'm human, I see how greed do
don't let it mislead you, I'm a better person now
You look at me, I'm a totally different version, how?
it's simple, my passion has never left my veins
and I'll keep calling your name until my damn jaws strains
I'm in deep emotional pain, I miss you in my hugs
I really miss you in my love.....

I made a mistake, my choice was unfair, unjust
I had some lust, I just want to make the gun bust
My life was in shambles, I was a cold blooded mammal
a soldier with infinite ammo, but without his camo
I was desperate, I never really wanted to leave you
I did some wrong things, and now I'm on my knees too
Asking for another chance.....I just need one more try
the world has never seen this emotionless floor cry
I have sore eyes, my core's dry, I'm bleeding black
and the result of such actions is this seeping track
My weakling back can't take repetitive stones
and being without you is damaging my damn bones.....

Sleepless nights wasted to the taste of tears
a waste of years, just so I had to face my fears
I lost you, my rock...my heart, my soul, my life
Why lie.....I can't begin to stab at it with knifes
I looked into your eyes, I saw light, I saw love
now I spend countless nights looking above
asking for your forgiveness, but God is mean
all I get is a motherfuckin' answering machine
If love was wrong, Then I don't wanna be right
I just want you back, I want you back in my life
You're the only one, the only one who made me feel
now all I have is a damn heart encased in steel
I'm a car without wheels, a building without a base
my soul is out of space, I need you to occupy it's place.

[<Stiiccy>]

me likey me likey...damn I'm older than you but your deffentily smarter hahahahhahaha

[MC Anonymous]

Thank dudes... appreciate it.

[James R.]

man that was damn good. I love the emotion. A little simpler than your average drop, but complexity would have ruined this. Good job man. Really good job.

[MC Anonymous]

Always great to see me do well when I expand my writing boundaries. Thanks James

[Requiem]

good job man. i really liked this, and it wasn't super complex. which is...different for you, but still a great piece. emotion and flow were great.

[MC Anonymous]

good job man. i really liked this, and it wasn't super complex. which is...different for you, but still a great piece. emotion and flow were great.

Thanks bro

[Solace]

Wow man that was great. You showed me a bit on msn but this whole is just great. I liked it being non compelx, as James said the complexity for a love song would have just ruined it. Great job man

[gutawafang]

another love poet annonymus!

[Slim Zaddy]

i love you 2 man ,, cuz this is sick . i really loved it .. good emotions bro . i can see them flowing through the verses , gd job here ,

[Arabian Shady]

nice job here B, the flow seemed to go along the lines of "when i'm gone" cause the rhyme pattern was similar, its a solid drop man
sick shit