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Regurgitate [New]

Postby Kez » Jan 13th, '09, 20:18

Behold, something i wrote out of boredom.

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You regurgitate bullshit, so i start workin with the hate
Then take it work it into meals and fuckin serve it with the plates
On the menu it's listed as a burger, with a shitty taste
The customers are leaving, "this is worse than Burger King, it's gay!"
I'm varied, like a motherfuckin murderer that's into rape
It's hard to make it when you have to work with all the shit today
I'll turn my voice into a fuckin Terminator incarna-
-tion, you think that's a diss? I've got much worse and more shit to say
There's so much hate to spit it all would take like 30 friggin days
By that time it would shrivel up, my mouth just burning with the taste
Of hatred pushing out of me, like trying to hurl but missed the place
Earth to pricks, okay, you're just a bunch of worthless dicks who may
Get laid if you knock her out then lift her skirt and lick away
Then when she wakes up she finds her panties dirty with a strange
Marking in the center, and as she turns to think, afraid
She finds the liquid turning to a pattern firmly; it's a "K"!
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 13th, '09, 21:55

Haha, damn thats a nice piece bro. Probably the most complex thing I've ever seen from you. All the multi's are crazy, and I liked how you stuck to the same rhyme-scheme all the way through. I think the flow could have been a little better at parts, some lines seemed longer than normal which kinda threw it off (unless you have a certain way of flowing it).

Overall, a dope drop man!
10/10
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby Solace » Jan 13th, '09, 22:21

You should post more often, that was great. The line ending wiht "it's gay!" wasn't good but the rest were good :y:

Favourite part:

"I'm varied, like a motherfuckin murderer that's into rape
It's hard to make it when you have to work with all the shit today
I'll turn my voice into a fuckin Terminator incarna-
-tion, you think that's a diss? I've got much worse and more shit to say
There's so much hate to spit it all would take like 30 friggin days
By that time it would shrivel up, my mouth just burning with the taste
Of hatred pushing out of me, like trying to hurl but missed the place"
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby Kez » Jan 13th, '09, 22:34

Steve Spag wrote:Haha, damn thats a nice piece bro. Probably the most complex thing I've ever seen from you. All the multi's are crazy, and I liked how you stuck to the same rhyme-scheme all the way through. I think the flow could have been a little better at parts, some lines seemed longer than normal which kinda threw it off (unless you have a certain way of flowing it).

Overall, a dope drop man!
10/10
:b:


Yeah i have a certain flow for it. If i recorded it you would see.

Thanks for checkin, all
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby James R. » Jan 14th, '09, 00:42

Steve Spag wrote:Haha, damn thats a nice piece bro. Probably the most complex thing I've ever seen from you. All the multi's are crazy, and I liked how you stuck to the same rhyme-scheme all the way through. I think the flow could have been a little better at parts, some lines seemed longer than normal which kinda threw it off (unless you have a certain way of flowing it).

Overall, a dope drop man!
10/10
:b:

My thoughts EXACTLY lol
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby mcZu » Jan 14th, '09, 15:09

Nice job man.. The last thing I heard from was probably ''Durex'' ( which was nice ).
Loved the multies and how you used the same rhyme trough the whole piece. Plus you trowed in some humour :y:
Nice drop :y:
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 14th, '09, 22:54

this is very good for you Kez, keep it up, i see you are getting there everytime u drop another one :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 14th, '09, 23:50

dope shit man :y:

now lets hear some audio
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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby Kez » Jan 15th, '09, 17:57

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:dope shit man :y:

now lets hear some audio


Dammit Sticcy, no sound remember? :angry:



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Re: Regurgitate [New]

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 16th, '09, 02:32

Kez wrote:
XXStiiCCyXX wrote:dope shit man :y:

now lets hear some audio


Dammit Sticcy, no sound remember? :angry:



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i know i know...but GET IT FIXED
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