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No mercy

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No mercy

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 14th, '09, 02:25

flip wack rappers like my middle fingers
i spit it, fuck these hip hop pitiful singers
your shits easy, i rip whats usaully difficult
i'm miserable, so i kill you when im ill
and i always am motherfucker i always can
no matter the cards i got, i go with my hand
stick with my intincts watch your movements
i binge drink, smoke weed make music
i'm being easy on ya, i could go harder
hit me with some marijuana, a bottle of vodka
and ill knock you outta the ballbark punks
so you'll keep your mouth shut if your smarta
i'm just giving you a tiny little cut
if i have to i'll tear it i'm prepared to fucks
this is the gasoline, sure i'm leaving you drenched
but dont make me come back with matches cause thats when
i'ma bring the fire, stay low i show no mercy
i serve mc's, leave in the state of emergency
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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Re: No mercy

Postby neversnooze » Jan 14th, '09, 02:29

the flow was sick Maximum. this could be like a party/hype music if it was sang :8)
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Re: No mercy

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 14th, '09, 02:31

thanks man, and yeah that was written to a hype sorta beat so i'm glad it showed.
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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