Drugs, love/ and whats next to lust!!!/

[Purple23Haze]

Open this door, what is that in your draw/
Did you score, cause I thought we weren’t gonna anymore/
Any more, or less/ what’s best/ I can’t just, stop what I’m doin
Ruin the sex/ the next/ got me stressed, just/
Just stop it/ Jesus aint the only one who can make a profit/
Rocks girls topless/ are you gonna give me a proper hit/
Drop on this/ On this/ dick please I need your gossips/
Your lips open talkin’/, servin birds squakin’/ chirpin’,
Whos that, that did it to ya/ a super trooper, not koopa/
Let me sooth ya/ I lost, but why did I lose ya, I'm a loser/

[noel]

[Ka0t1c]

im unsure, u got good stuff but it reminds me of Cam'Ron so it's like a 6/10 to me, keep writing more

[Solace]

couldnt really understand the structure i thought the jesus profit line was the best tho.

[MC Anonymous]

Garbage....

[James R.]

You got a really strange style and a really weird flow that I couldn't really catch onto. You got good concepts, and that jesus profit line was pretty hot. Aside from that it was average. Nothing really stand up about it, just kinda there. I'd like to see smtn longer. Maybe a full 16 bars or a song even.

[Purple23Haze]

You got a really strange style and a really weird flow that I couldn't really catch onto. You got good concepts, and that jesus profit line was pretty hot. Aside from that it was average. Nothing really stand up about it, just kinda there. I'd like to see smtn longer. Maybe a full 16 bars or a song even.

I have been slippin lately I will admit I got school tryin to come up in the world can't write everyday anymore lost inspiration and such but really come on I got all the rhymes you need to feed that greed and multies upon saltines we crackers actors tryin to black but the facts are we just nas car billy bob thorton stay scorin but forever borin white a plain sight I talk for myslef but what is you when shine bright a star? yea right my future screwed tight not loose like them chicks from the moulin rouge

[Ka0t1c]

what the fuck are you even saying, that's probably the question we all have on our minds cuz we can't even say "oh, that's gotta be abstract" cuz it aint.

[Purple23Haze]

what the fuck are you even saying, that's probably the question we all have on our minds cuz we can't even say "oh, that's gotta be abstract" cuz it aint.

R U serious seriously I'm your favorite rappers favorite rapper!

[Solace]

what the fuck are you even saying, that's probably the question we all have on our minds cuz we can't even say "oh, that's gotta be abstract" cuz it aint.

R U serious seriously I'm your favorite rappers favorite rapper!

i hope that wasnt intended to be funny...cause it wasnt