Don't Tell Me You Love Me (Poem)
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Re: Don't Tell Me You Love Me (Poem)
by James R. » Jan 13th, '09, 01:10
That last part was sick. I might do smtn crazy like, believe it. I aint know you had it in you MacD.
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Re: Don't Tell Me You Love Me (Poem)
by MC Anonymous » Jan 13th, '09, 01:11
this is constructed very well, emotion was ace man. Loved it. 
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Re: Don't Tell Me You Love Me (Poem)
by Solace » Jan 13th, '09, 22:22
Yeah it was nice Scott, i loved the last part like James did. You seem to write really good when its emotional
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Re: Don't Tell Me You Love Me (Poem)
by mcZu » Jan 14th, '09, 15:18
Fuck I got goosbumps... Great job man, really that last verse and especially that last line, some impressive shit Scot. I could really relate to it and it was written very very good. Nicly structured and such. Gotta co-sign with Epiphany, writting emotional pieces is you strongest point.
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