Look Into My Eyes

[Mr.Maximum]

Verse 1

Your always there for me no questions asked
You saved my life once I will never forget that
I love it when you tilt your head and laugh
But your unreachable so I thought I’d let it pass
Besides there were distractions and road blocks
Like I was just getting out of the post op
I was still on the operating table being sown up
By that I mean I was just getting over shit and growing up
But then I made the decision and I gave in
You did to, and for a while it was amazing
We were being foolish though we just didn’t understand it
You started having second thoughts and I panicked
Double or nothing was something you didn’t want a part of
This is a week after we both said nothing would part us
Or break us up girl you had me star struck
But in the end when you left I just got my heart crushed

Chorus

If I could only find the right words to rhyme
If I could only make every verse and every line
Express what I really feel inside well then I
Wouldn’t even have to ask you to look into my eyes
And see that I’m not lying im trying to be honest
To help you get by the lie and see that its all nonsense
You’re my friend im your friend till my end
Don’t believe me look into my eyes then

Verse 2

I’m still awake and I have rehibilatated
What I did was waited and took a little vacation
Got over the pain and the heartbreak I tasted
I grew up a bit and I learned to be patient
And now were talking again laughing and kiddin
your getting so beautiful you look like one of the women
and your still sweet as ever as you smile and listen
to me pour out my heart as if its this same song I’m spittin
and then you tell me that I have changed
I stopped overeacting and got my head straight
I’m convinced theres a reason we didn’t go are separate ways
And were close now in these better days
Thinking of you was bittersweet till a few months ago
You warmed me up girl when I was stuck in the cold
And I was there to comfort you when you lost your uncle
But you cant trust me on one thing girl that’s just fucking low

Chorus

If I could only find the right words to rhyme
If I could only make every verse and every line
Express what I really feel inside well then I
Wouldn’t even have to ask you to look into my eyes
And see that I’m not lying I’m trying to be honest
To help you get by the lie and see that its all nonsense
You’re my friend im your friend till my end
Don’t believe me look into my eyes then

Verse 3

All I’m asking for is a chance another shot
Remember you promised were you being honest or not
You can trust me girl my problems are lost
And I’m on track I’m on a track offering all that I got
I don’t know if I love you but I know I did once
And so did you so we shouldn’t give up
Don’t tell me that was back then its only been months
And we have both been through some intense stuff
But were still here and were going to pull through
Your so damn beautiful if only you knew
How pretty you really are and so funny so smart
With a loving heart as lovely as those stars
I’ve never met a girl like you and I’m not surprised
Because your to special not to be one of a kind
And maybe you don’t believe me you think its just a lie
Well then next time you see me look into my eyes


Chorus

If I could only find the right words to rhyme
If I could only make every verse and every line
Express what I really feel inside well then I
Wouldn’t even have to ask you to look into my eyes
And see that I’m not lying I’m trying to be honest
To help you get by the lie and see that its all nonsense
You’re my friend im your friend till my end
Don’t believe me look into my eyes then

[Mr.Maximum]

feedback anyone????

[ThomasAguanis]

I liked it. Some deep stuff in there, very heartfelt. I could tell you really wanted to get your feelings out in the song, and you did very effectively. Some of the rhyme patterns could use some work, but as you keep writing that usually improves as you go on (you know, practice makes perfect). Keep it up man

[Mr.Maximum]

thanks man, and yeah i agree i'll probably end up editing parts of it when i go to record it,

[neb121]

its really good. i love the chorus. very deep.

[Mr.Maximum]

thanks i appreciate it

[Slim Zaddy]

man i liked it , it's pretty decent .. lyrics and rhymes were great man , and liked the emotion in it .. gd job here dude .... keep it going

[James R.]

I like that you poured your emotion into this, and that was the best part. I felt the flow was a little jumpy in places, but it fell off in different spots as I read it, so it's probably because I didn't write it. Either way just run through it again and make sure. The rhyming and rhyme schemes were pretty basic, but it was an emotional piece so I don't hold that against you too much. With practice you'll get better and more original with how you write. Good job man. Keep droppin

[Mr.Maximum]

i appreciate it James R, same to you z_em