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Random Shit

Postby Solace » Jan 15th, '09, 23:19

I was just writing some shit randomly.

My lyrical patterns at just fatal to the average,
They're lethal to the weak, attack you like a savage,
Through this madness, a quick mad diss,
Specialized tactics, finish you and that's it,
So give me the mic, just pass it and I'll be rapping,
I'm usually rapid, especially when I'm jacking,
Talent's what you're lacking, look at my back bitch,
Scars of the knives from all of my friends backstabbing,
Fuck with me and prepare to get your asskicked,
Rap is a back flip, I'm just doing gymnastics.
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 15th, '09, 23:29

Wow man, really impressed with this piece. LOVE the wordplay on it, the flow was soo smooth, and you were killin' it with multi's. Probably one of most enjoyable drops I've seen from you.

Keep it up bro!
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Jan 15th, '09, 23:31

Steve Spag wrote:Wow man, really impressed with this piece. LOVE the wordplay on it, the flow was soo smooth, and you were killin' it with multi's. Probably one of most enjoyable drops I've seen from you.

Keep it up bro!
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:o Thanks man, I appreciate it. I guess I'm improving :happy:
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