Metamorphosis

[MC Anonymous]

Verbally vicious, a ridiculous lyricist, leave ya body bloody like a clitoris
what spit is this? I'm not a ventriloquist, spittin' punchlines with the illest fist
I'm killing this, the only rapper with the willingness to spit for 24hour work days
practice does pay, hunt like osprey to pray, just gimme the say, fine have it your way
alone I'm OK, but lyrically I'm above speculation, a monumental collection
of adaption that defies natural selection, now I was born into perfection
a metamorphosis of psychosis that splits my main nucleus quickly like mitosis
born with a diagnosis of brilliance, ability to use telekinesis with my whole fist
approach this, get radioactive burns from my chakra, but yet I'm soul less.

You can't feel the best
you can't heal the rest
you can't peel my vest
you can't steal my quest
you can't drop the time
you can't stop a rhyme
you can't pop a dime
you can't mop a crime x2

A scientifically defined kind of mind, behind enemy lines I'm sublime
with my lines, face to face I'll erase and eliminate boundaries of rhyme
cross dimensions through portals in the sky, put a 4D bullet in your eyes
I pull it for your demise, then you realize the past crossed with present times
causing the bullet I just ejected, like a mirror, it was instantly reflected
and dissected the time line, we're now in a place where no one is protected
just as I expected, a millennium physicist twisting the very fabrics of space
with dynamics of great proportions, I stay recessive like letters that are lower case.

You can't feel the best
you can't heal the rest
you can't peel my vest
you can't steal my quest
you can't drop the time
you can't stop a rhyme
you can't pop a dime
you can't mop a crime x2

[Ka0t1c]

it's pretty badass, but i think the chorus should be worked on a lil bit more

also, you lost momentum (imo) on this part:

practice does pay, hunt like osprey to pray, just gimme the say, fine have it your way, alone I'm OK

[Solace]

Good shit man, but I think the chorus was just fine. Nice verses, that line kinda ruined it for me too on the first verse (practice does pay, hunt like osprey to pray, just gimme the say, fine have it your way, alone I'm OK)

Keep it up man

[MC Anonymous]

I got the line like that so I can bridge the first half of the verse to the second. If I change it it wouldn't flow correctly on the beat. Thanks for checking it out!

[James R.]

Cosign on the other two, except I think the line is cool. It transitions well. Good job bro.

[Purple23Haze]

I crave...the wave, like ocean spray, my own path, my own way
leave you showered in an hour with doubt or, stashed power
without her, you now heard the word, you're a pouter,
pooter, ultra dodo commuter, fewer, Lucifer's, these days, since I started to graze,
I'm sick to death of these residual gays, and gay rhymes and heard thru the grape vine
That it takes time, to understand the proper hit time, proportionate to mine,
You out line, off base, a waste of space, I got bountiful, countless flows,
Learn from the chose, you a coward yo, won't even amount ta fools gold,
Truth be told, your 15 aint can't grow inbetween less or more
weed and liqour got you fucked up sat tripper, ass licker, pussy flicker,
Goody dinner hmm I'm hungry goona eat you this winter!

Yo your shit is straight male a booty

[Solace]

I crave...the wave, like ocean spray, my own path, my own way
leave you showered in an hour with doubt or, stashed power
without her, you now heard the word, you're a pouter,
pooter, ultra dodo commuter, fewer, Lucifer's, these days, since I started to graze,
I'm sick to death of these residual gays, and gay rhymes and heard thru the grape vine
That it takes time, to understand the proper hit time, proportionate to mine,
You out line, off base, a waste of space, I got bountiful, countless flows,
Learn from the chose, you a coward yo, won't even amount ta fools gold,
Truth be told, your 15 aint can't grow inbetween less or more
weed and liqour got you fucked up sat tripper, ass licker, pussy flicker,
Goody dinner hmm I'm hungry goona eat you this winter!

Yo your shit is straight male a booty

[Ka0t1c]

do u mean, mail a bootleg???

[Purple23Haze]

do u mean, mail a bootleg???

Not in the sense, I want it, his shits intense, not a compliment
I won't repent, for droppin em see "an a I'm a miss" to the pavement gently
hell sent "a" "bent" gent like a dent in my car
the ugliest rapper by far actor slash scarred
The only reason any venom spittin in my direction
is even gettin thru is cause dude was sexually abused
I'm so sick of these fools not gettin schooled
by the true hip hop realists that speal or spill shit ta live
Not cause they picked up a pen to deal with shit, oblivious
he is the shittest call me garbage
Arsen aint far from his heart ridge
A dart aint far from a fart pushed outta the ass in to brain exact frame aim away from name sayin

[James R.]

Man what the fuck are you talking about?

[Purple23Haze]

Man what the fuck are you talking about?

who me or MC I'm a miss

[James R.]

Man what the fuck are you talking about?

who me or MC I'm a miss

You... I understand what MC Anon is saying. But I can't quite figure why you're droppin verses or wtf they're supposed to be proving.

[Purple23Haze]

Man what the fuck are you talking about?

who me or MC I'm a miss

You... I understand what MC Anon is saying. But I can't quite figure why you're droppin verses or wtf they're supposed to be proving.

K dude I figured you where talking about me but K here it is MC anon posted my drugs love and lust blah blah was garbage he don't know my style he don't know me He is good especially for a 15 yr old but yo don't come to me who has been written 10 yrs with a garbage post or I'll attack you you don't get it I understand and most people can't comprehend my level understood fine but when I dumb down to write a piece about a girl respect that cause love and lust are complicated! I'm drunk if that don't make sense let me know!

[James R.]

Oh ok then. Well this would probably count as spamming. I wanna let you know before a mod or admin does because it can result in warning and account suspension and shit. But yeah, just drop more songs man. You do have me curious now so Im gonna check your thread.

[MC Anonymous]

-_-'' That was weak...