Another Verse

[MC Anonymous]

I'll put death under your soul to get ya spirits lifted
then the sheer hit shifted, fresh so I'm spearmint gifted
so fear the wicked, my lines rotates in ya mind like time
So ill, my mouth releases infinite symbols when I rhyme
unlimited divine, shoot you with more clips then Hollywood
idiots don't stand a chance, do you think your folly could?
I'll attack ya pressure points to push ya buttons like a keyboard
to record my wins you need 3 scores, my flow constant like sea shores
who needs more? I'll put the metal to ya chest like a doctor
my blade spinnin' like coptors, I don't need my dick to pop her
I stand, grab the mic, my adrenaline spikes like a angry wife
fuck this life, my soul's cold but I still burn fools like dry ice
Fuck with me you die twice, mentally and physically murdered
you better watch what you murmur, I'm not a waiter but I run the servers
from 1 simile to infinity, I'm exponentially better.

[James R.]

Lmfao half of these are from that I'm A Legend thread you made. Good idea recycling those lines man. I liked it. Some good punches, not your best work, but still a great drop.

[Ka0t1c]

^what he said, i enjoyed reading this

[MC Anonymous]

I couldn't let those crazy punchlines go.... so I put them to a verse lol

[Arabian Shady]

I couldn't let those crazy punchlines go.... so I put them to a verse lol

best thing to do

flow was dope and verse was pretty enjoyable man, hilarious punchlines and easy structure makes this drop far above average in all books
sick shit
Peace

P.S.:i just posted my competition verse so could you and james give me your expert opinion on where i went wrong? its called "Underlying Reality"